It was good

Lithuania's name is Tolys, Toris is a mistranslation and not a real Lithuanian name

this was by far the best Hatalia fanfic I have ever read this was phenomenal and you should be proud this should be a movie

Wow this story is amazing!

German nouns are capitalized. From what I've seen so far, the wording is correct :)

This fanfiction will forever be in my heart. I love how the plot is so intense and logical, and how each character seems to have amazing roles and awesome character. It's funny how everything is so serious and they don't mention lunch but just go to pubs and snack lmao.

I screamed so much when I read "The Battle of Long Island" it's not often where the place I grew up is mentioned in a fanfic. :D

this fanfic is amazing!

Absolutely Amazing! The way you portray the characters... the way you write the fight scenes and the way you make every character In the story useful even if they only appeared,in like one chapter... I really like Matthew here he's sooooooo bad ass and writing amazing stories.

That. Was. Awesome.

Read it in one go, and he'll yeah, I do not regret it.

America though :((( at least that Charles was convict like hell yeah. France here was awesome. And everybody too.

Thanks for this awesome work. I love it.

There's nothing much to say, but, this is one of the best hetalia fanfics I've read! You did wonderful on this one author so congrats and well thanks for this book. Great job.

Usually, with fics over 100k words, I take a long time to read them and find myself trying to slog through them. That wasn't the case here-I read the whole story in under a day. You did a good job with keeping the story engaging and doing a complex plot.

Sooooooo what country did Charles personify? Please elaborate

I was wondering if the serum would work on the imposter nations... I guess now I'll find out... And I suppose that if Charles does have a way to make humans into nations, then by that logic, perhaps that will be able to reverse the effect on America and Lithuania? But first they'll have to get at it... :P

Funny, I think that was more or less the same explanation I gave for Prussia's "nationhood" in my fanfiction... Come to think of it, the two stories do seem to have similar ideas... That might be one reason I like this so much, lol. I think your is a bit more planned out than mine was though...

No. I don't like this. No, nein, nyet, non, iie. Also, Germany, shouldn't you have mentions to the others that you saw America on the news? Fake America anyway? Along with a possibly fake Lithuania?