|Reviews for Ohana|
| SparklingBlizzard16 chapter 1 . 5/13
Ohana means family. Family means no one gets left behind. Jack was left behind. Jack was left alone.
| freakybubbletea chapter 1 . 5/12
Noooo I wasn't prepared for the bittersweet feel trip ;_;
When I stumbled across this and realized just what it was about I almost didn't want to read further (but what no how could I not) aND THIS Is beAUTIFUL. And sad. And so tear-jerking-ly so beautiful & beautifully-written.
*& basically wow I love this so I click fave ok*
| TheEpicDuck123 chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Oh my god I almost cried. No, I'm deathly serious. I don't think anything's ever affected me as much. You should turn this into a story, have the guardians come back or show something like Jack keeping the holiday's up or whatever, you're the author
| MindfulWrath chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
AAAAAAHHHHH why can't I hold all these feels?
Seriously, I like it! I hope you continue with the larger project; I wanna know what happened!
| xxLightAndDarknessxx chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
So you are going to continue this story?If you are GREAT you can't leave me with this sad story with no explanation.
| Auua Ytjoml chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Can't wait to read the whole thing!