|Reviews for My Love, My Sin|
| J Chesney chapter 22 . 3/6
I really, really loved your story. Not one word was wasted and you managed to evoke very real feelings in the three main characters.
| Fiyaaa chapter 22 . 1/18
Oh Sullie, how the fack is this your first fic? Your writing style is flawless and unique. Thank you for taking me on this incredible adventure. Despite a hugeass TBR, I haven't been able to get into anything and you Missy have set the bar so high that my 5 foot nothing self can't even see it. This story was amazing, how in so few words you made me feel every emotion under the sun is beyond me.
The plot, the characters, the pace and style were perfect and just something else, there's a quality to your writing which is so different and such a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing this, remember me when you become all big and famous ok?
| Fiyaaa chapter 21 . 1/18
Hot damnnnn, what's my death toll so far? 3?
| Fiyaaa chapter 20 . 1/18
So the Carlisle sympathy I was squelching with my inked and smoky love for Edward is coming out.
He did love her but he deserved someone who loved him back and could give him as much he gave them. And she needed, she craved the buzz E gave her.
| Fiyaaa chapter 19 . 1/18
'I watch Love shift to Hurt, shift to Hate.'
I seriously wonder how someone hadn't hit me over the head and made me read this before, because you are a story teller and a half. I felt all of that, and it hurt and it was f'ing brilliant.
| Fiyaaa chapter 18 . 1/18
He's unhealthy is so many ways but it just doesn't matter, the pills, the smoking, just everything is so bad but... ASHFSU only four chapters and I'm having a 2 am flail!
| Fiyaaa chapter 17 . 1/18
'When someone like Love looks at you, your life changes.' and her description at the beginning makes me hurt a little for Carlisle,
I mean sdjfdvnifvriaen, jhhezzzz Sullie!
| Fiyaaa chapter 16 . 1/18
Eight years?! JFC! I feel sorry for Carlisle, then I remember what Sin ignites in her (me), and while that feeling is still there, it is now a tiny smidge. But damn eight years, it's something that she can no longer, Mama was right Isabel, you need to make some decisions.
| Fiyaaa chapter 15 . 1/18
OMFGGGGGG! IS CARLISLE HIS FOSTER FATHER?! COS DEAD. DEAD. DEADER THAN THAT LAST TIME I DIED IN YOUR REVIEW BOX.
I loved EPOV, despite episode two of 'Fiya's dying'. The way he described her and their relationship is just everything.
| Fiyaaa chapter 14 . 1/18
How do you manage to give me goosebumps in so few words?
| Fiyaaa chapter 13 . 1/18
'I silence Love's call to read Sin's words'
'My Sin is pushing buttons and testing boundaries. My heartbeat doubles, triples, flies; my chest splits, and my eyes tear.'
I have a writing crush on you.
| Fiyaaa chapter 12 . 1/18
The description of her memorising him was just something else.
'When I close my eyes, I see a clear winter's sky, every star visible.' Duuuudeee.
| Fiyaaa chapter 11 . 1/18
OK, fine! I'll say it, I'm Team Sin. Soz Carlisle, but after such a good lemon the word that really stood out was 'passive'.
There's a lot more than that she's faking and she wants it diirttyyyy...
| Fiyaaa chapter 10 . 1/18
I shouldn't really, but there is a part of me that loves the difference between waking up with her Love and staying because of a feeling of compulsion, compared to the pull of Sin that she can't fight.
She's thrilled and afraid, and I'm tingling at these two!
| Fiyaaa chapter 9 . 1/18
The names she gives them just add so much, you are a writing goddess and the imagery and emotion you create blow me away.