Reviews for incipiens fati
big glee famanic chapter 11 . 8/14/2016
I'm loving this, you have my interest. Keep it up, can't wait for the update
rhizz17 chapter 11 . 5/28/2016
Update please
MikeyBlue chapter 11 . 4/25/2016
I really enjoyed this story. I hope there will be a chapter 12.
Ghargr18 chapter 11 . 4/8/2016
Is that the end? It feels as though it should continue, at least throug the summer. I really liked this story
Guest chapter 11 . 2/16/2016
Please update soon
Gleas chapter 11 . 9/9/2015
I love it... Harry the big brother is awesome XD! I'd like to point out that several times you have mixed up some names... nothing major or anything but thought you should know- Lily instead of Steph and Rose somewhere as well
Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2015
I just started reading your fanfiction and I think that it is amazing. I love tat Harry is so protective of Steve. Also, I don't know if you watch doctor who, but in case you do, the 'Master' reference was awesome. I have to get back to reading our story.
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 10 . 5/2/2015
The original was better based on the first chapter. So I am quitting this story now.
Alexandria.Nymphadora chapter 11 . 2/26/2015
So that's how your going to end your once interesting story?!
ashynlem chapter 11 . 6/17/2014
I generally liked it, but i think we really don't have enough background on which families the potters interacted with when harry patrick and steve were younger, and also when you started in on the politics route, i would be alot better if you added some more about the relationships, like the light families, dark families and the neutrals abit about who are allied and such things, maybe somthing about the businesses, otherwise i think it's decent but has lots of room for inprovement, i'd like to read where you go from here so could you update this story with a notice when you publish a sequel?
Kurogami Mika chapter 10 . 6/14/2014
Please write a sequel!
L.Maurel chapter 10 . 6/3/2014
Well, this certainly is an interesting twist. I'm looking forward to any sequel you may have written or may jet write.
midnight-flurry chapter 10 . 12/30/2013
Nice. Harry finished the basilisk with brains instead of brawn as a true ravenclaw would. Patrick and his parents are so blah. How can they ignore and neglect their own children like that?! It's a bit unbelievable that no one caught that in their world. And as Harry solve the mystery of the chamber of secrets what have Patrick, Ron, and Harmione been doing? It is Ron's sister and Patrick grew up with the Wesleys so he should have a bigger incentive to save Ginny . Also, we know who are Steve's friends bit what about Harry's? We only know that he's friends with the trains but that's it. Anyway, I really enjoy your story and look forward to reading more of this story in the future. Happy New Year.
adenoide chapter 10 . 12/28/2013
Why is Harry who goes to the chamber?
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 10 . 12/29/2013
How will Patrick to nit being the savior this time
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