Reviews for Italian mafia
KiyaTheCrow chapter 1 . 10/31
I couldn't really read the story. Too much coding, couldn't really tell apart the code from the story. It would help if you removed that, and also put the story into Paragraphs. Makes jt easier on the eyes. :D
DeathOfAnAngel12 chapter 1 . 4/23
You might want to re-visit this and fix the coding... Most of my vision was obscured by the coding rather than seeing the story.
Damn Italy XD chapter 1 . 2/24
Please continue this story... I'd love to see their reactions and Romano would probably be like 'poker face' sitting down on the chair or something OwO Btw, I recommend you use paragraphs as it makes reading easier...
Annabeth2011 chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
I quite like this story, but could you edit out the extra computer text?
17Green Rose18 chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
I Wanna know what will happen next Please please update!
Jittle11 chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
I want more but whats with the 'p style' and stuff?
Fangirl chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
UPDATE!UPDATE NOW!Please.
TheGrayWolfHowls chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
Update soon please
WuerdGirl chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
You might want to fix this. Just take a look at and you'll see what I mean. It's really good though. Please update.
Wackyfur chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
What's with the computer talk?
Sadie chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
This is a good book but the bit before the actual story is annoying because you have to skip around to read it. Good luck with the story! :)
Love-is-Cyanide chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
Format's funny.
p style"font-family: Tinos; font-size: medium;" begins the lines

basically, its got the programming codes mixed in with the story, making it near impossible to read. Fixing it should be as simple as re-uploading the chapter though.
Bubbles chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Dang you stranger. I no longer like cliffies...
Wht would happen next? How will they rect espesilly germany?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
UPDATE
NakuHetalia chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
Conti /*u*/ Ita Mafioso
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