I read this awhile back, before I became a member. Not long ago I remembered it fondly and decided to look it up (never really dreaming I'd find it again). I'm glad I did, because it's just as magical as before. Thanks for this great piece.

Oh, this is good! It's more of an essay than a story, but somehow it wos more than either... good job. I loved hearing Katie and Gilda talk about writing. Well done.

Wow. That completely was not what I expected, but it was brilliant. A really good, insightful piece!

I absolutely love this story. There are...no words to say how amazing it is. You are a truly amazing writer.

This is beautiful and amazing and wonderful. Most authors who try to say that everythign written is true fail; you succeed. It reminded me of Narnia, which I haven't read in far too long, and Oz, which I've only read the ones I own in the past few years. I loved those books so much when I was younger; I should really get back to them. I guess the thing I like about what you're saying is not that they're the same or that everything that happened in the real Narnia was not Christian allegory, but that they're real, at least in part, because they were written. The formatting's a little off, by the way. It doesn't exactly detract from the writing, it just made me think it was a poem at first.

Wow, just Wow.
I once noticed that Narnia and Middle Earth fit together, with Valinor between them, and The Kingdom of Wisdom (The Phantom Tollbooth) south of Narnia. Ansalon (Dragonlance) fits south of Gondor in Middle Earth... I never thought of making it a story though.
I think the formatting could use some work, and there could be some improvment in the way things were worded. ("I should have thought of that with my own brain?" sounds awkward.) Overall, this story is really great.

That was beautiful. I don't know what else to say, besides thank you. Thank you very much. I loved reading this, and it is always nice to know that others agree - the worlds we write are just as real as the one we walk about in. Because, of course, that's completely true. *soft smile, basking in the warm glow*
~~Vikki

That was absolutely amazing. I loved it.

Oh, wow, that's a really great story. It's an interesting, original concept, and you tell it so well. Awesome job!

Very well written, with no obvious grammar and spelling mistakes. On the whole, I liked it. The fic was at times whimsy and playful, but the message still shines through. An excellant job of telling the story, but not beating the reader over the head with the message.

This is really good. The formatting has gone a bit wrong I think, it's all to the left and quite hard to read, but that's probably the thing too.
It's a good idea. Maybe some parts need elaboration, as some parts are slightly unclear and there's a lot of philosophical theory in it. But if that's what you were going for, then great.
Overall, I think it's well-thought out and obviously has a nice plot. Your spelling and grammar are also refreshingly good. It could use a little work with formatting and clarifying, but well done.
~Amy x

This is really good. I can't think of anything more to say, but I've read this before, a long time ago and I really like it.

Wow. How amazing. Well done! :)
And yes, editors can be cruel and/or stupid. You wouldn't believe the response I got when I tried to publish a paper on fanfiction. :P Ah, well, their loss...

Wow. You've mangaged to put into words why I read fantasy, and attempt my own little drabbles. Thank you!

I can't believe no one's reviewed this yet! I was really inspired by your story. The whole idea, and the referance to Plato...it was just fascinating! Bravo!