Reviews for All Sorts of Things: A Honeymoon Fic
enterprisefan13 chapter 3 . 3/26
This is beautiful. Like watching an episode. I do hope you continue
timeandpixiedust chapter 3 . 12/29/2015
This fic is a really great! It bothered me that we didn't get to see at least a glimpse of their honeymoon in the series. I know it's been a while but I hope you come back to write their fun times in France. :)
mar-hhr4ever chapter 3 . 5/31/2015
Just re-read this. Why haven't we seen a chapter set in France in this lovly honeymoon fic? I knoe some time has passed since you wrote this but could you be inspired to continue it?
Stephanie chapter 3 . 9/24/2014
It is very cute! Lovely! I hope you will continue your modern M&M fanfictions.
luvgoround chapter 3 . 9/23/2014
Absolutely loved every word of this chapter. Ahhh what a delicious taste of their honeymoon - they never got (at least we never got to see) - just love all their flirty playfulness and you wrote everything beautifully. You helped to fill in a huge gap - and it is pure delight. Looking forward to more of them and this in France! And not a year from now, either! :)
Hellyb chapter 3 . 9/23/2014
This has the makings of an excellent story - please continue
ultimategingepond chapter 3 . 9/23/2014
Here we are. I read this last night before bed and let it set a bit before skimming over again this morning.
Mainly I just have to say that your Mary is one of my favs, and I', not sure if its because deep down you share these same vulnerabilities or the fact that you just get her but its spot on. Her actions and words flow naturally, I never question why she is doing something or why it doesn't sound canon. I know that really has nothing to do with the chapter but it has been playing in my mind.
As far as the chapter, I enjoy the balance between their cheeky playfulness and the tenderness of Matthew and Mary. That what I miss about the pair we were shown a glimpse of in DA and I would have hoped if he would have lived that we would have been shown it as well.
I will beg you to write more, you truly are talented.
cc-weaver chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
I had to go back and read the first 2 chapters again before venturing into the third. This chapter was wonderful. You write these characters so beautifully. I can feel the emotions that you have written perfectly. I was very close to tears and that doesn't happen very often for me when it comes to ff.
DAGuest chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
Terrific chapter! Best part for me was when Mary reflected and realized the true meaning of "lover". This story certainly filled in the gaps that we didn't see in canon. Can't wait what else you have in store for them on their honeymoon.
downtonlove chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
Gorgeous writing and chapter. You have such a gift, you write M/M so well. Thank you for this beautiful, raw and sexy chapter.
Ssnqrq chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
So glad that you don't drop this fantastic story. I love the chapter, full of MM. Please update
soon!
theMatthewReview chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
This is so much better than the real show - Matthew and Mary fit together, it cannot be denied. Thank you for updating this breathtakingly beautiful fic.
Apollo888 chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
So good! Really pleased to see that you are continuing with this even as Series 5 is now upon us. Their playfulness and discovery is new and thrilling and it's fun to see them forging ahead into it and not allowing their fear and nerves to get the best of them so far. Lovely.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
Thrilled you are continuing this story! It's lovely. Really love all your m/ m writing. You capture canon and modern both which must be difficult but you excel at both ( your cancelled universe is superb ) thanks formthe update. Excellent as always.
Palindrome310 chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
Loved it! So glad you are still with this story, I'm still in. Matthew and Mary are learning how to be with each other and it so nice to see them happy, Mary's doubts and Matthew's back add a realistic tone that doesn't change their joy. I found interesting Mary's reflection about intimacy and her own vision about what happened, to be recast as someone who made a choice. The sea-bathing memory was lovely and we could see the sister's personalities in their reaction to the sea
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