This is such a wonderful fic. Your writing is truly breathtaking! A wonderful glimpse into MM wedding night - exactly as I would have imagined it. So loving, so deep, just the right amount of reference to the past. Each chapter is a gift, and while I know it’s been years, would love to see a continuation into France and their honeymoon- All sorts of things..

loved it

Why would the little bitch be nervous? It’s not like she hasn’t done this before

This is beautiful. Like watching an episode. I do hope you continue

This fic is a really great! It bothered me that we didn't get to see at least a glimpse of their honeymoon in the series. I know it's been a while but I hope you come back to write their fun times in France. :)

Just re-read this. Why haven't we seen a chapter set in France in this lovly honeymoon fic? I knoe some time has passed since you wrote this but could you be inspired to continue it?

It is very cute! Lovely! I hope you will continue your modern M&M fanfictions.

Absolutely loved every word of this chapter. Ahhh what a delicious taste of their honeymoon - they never got (at least we never got to see) - just love all their flirty playfulness and you wrote everything beautifully. You helped to fill in a huge gap - and it is pure delight. Looking forward to more of them and this in France! And not a year from now, either! :)

This has the makings of an excellent story - please continue

Here we are. I read this last night before bed and let it set a bit before skimming over again this morning.
Mainly I just have to say that your Mary is one of my favs, and I', not sure if its because deep down you share these same vulnerabilities or the fact that you just get her but its spot on. Her actions and words flow naturally, I never question why she is doing something or why it doesn't sound canon. I know that really has nothing to do with the chapter but it has been playing in my mind.
As far as the chapter, I enjoy the balance between their cheeky playfulness and the tenderness of Matthew and Mary. That what I miss about the pair we were shown a glimpse of in DA and I would have hoped if he would have lived that we would have been shown it as well.
I will beg you to write more, you truly are talented.

I had to go back and read the first 2 chapters again before venturing into the third. This chapter was wonderful. You write these characters so beautifully. I can feel the emotions that you have written perfectly. I was very close to tears and that doesn't happen very often for me when it comes to ff.

Terrific chapter! Best part for me was when Mary reflected and realized the true meaning of "lover". This story certainly filled in the gaps that we didn't see in canon. Can't wait what else you have in store for them on their honeymoon.

Gorgeous writing and chapter. You have such a gift, you write M/M so well. Thank you for this beautiful, raw and sexy chapter.

So glad that you don't drop this fantastic story. I love the chapter, full of MM. Please update
soon!

This is so much better than the real show - Matthew and Mary fit together, it cannot be denied. Thank you for updating this breathtakingly beautiful fic.