Reviews for All Sorts of Things: A Honeymoon Fic |
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downtonlove chapter 2 . 9/27/2013 This was absolutely gorgeous from beginning to end. DA gives us pieces and lucky for us we have incredible writers who can fill in the missing pieces. You did this here, and wonderfully. Thank you for filling in parts of M/M's journey for me. I will treasure this story, especially this chapter. You're brilliant! Thank you! |
Me chapter 2 . 9/25/2013 I've always thought that the peculiar circumstances (that's putting it mildly) of Mary's initial initiation into sex were a bit glossed over on the actual show and seemed to have very little consequence with her relationship with matthew. Of course, the show's world skips over quite a lot. you did well to mix in those elements. Sexy and tender fare, m'dear. Well done. |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/24/2013 Wonderful chapter. I loved how Matthew remembered that someone had held his hand when he was first injured. |
didyouhaveagoodtime chapter 2 . 9/24/2013 Oh, that was so good, my dear. And so poignant too, so meaningful. Thank you for this story. I can hardly wait for more :) |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/23/2013 Everything about this chapter is perfect :) |
Audrey C chapter 2 . 9/23/2013 Really very well done. Perfect exploration of their first time. Very believable and touching. Love this! |
Willa Dedalus chapter 2 . 9/22/2013 Head canon! OMG. They spoke of 2.05 on their wedding night. That was such an amazing conversation. |
AmeriGirlTN chapter 2 . 9/22/2013 Reading this tonight when S4 premiered is especially poignant but thanks to wonderful fanfic authors like you, M/M will live forever. Thanks so much for this beautifully written sensitive sweet story of a scene that JF chose to steal from us. Hugs! |
luvgoround chapter 2 . 9/22/2013 Such a mix of emotions - smiling, crying, and being so happy for them. Loved this last section specifically - as they relaxed and began to discover and enjoy each other. |
OrangeShipper chapter 2 . 9/22/2013 You star... Everything one could possibly hope for from a wedding night fic :) :) How you manage to capture their nerves and delight and fears and eagerness and love, all together, chasing away their ghosts is just exquisite. (And, naturally, HOT.) Now they've leapt this hurdle, I can't wait to see the development of them learning about each other and how to be together - I know we've a treat in store! |
PelirrojaBiu chapter 1 . 9/22/2013 Fantastic story! |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/22/2013 This. Is. Perfect. |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/22/2013 Yea! You took it on and it was lovely. I love these two. |
Palindrome310 chapter 2 . 9/22/2013 Love the Anna and Mary conversation. I really like that you deal with dark topics of war, his injury and her past with a sweet and description of the nervousness and anxiety of first time. It was full of emotion and sensual in a realistic way. Totally love the mention of holding hands in the hospital. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2013 Update? soon? Pleeeeeeeeease! Can't wait, it's the best! :) |