11 years long hiatus

You put trannies instead of trainees...completely different things.

This would make a great story if you had someone go back and fix your spelling and change words like witch to which and after words to afterwards

love story cant wait for new chapters

Witch for which twice in this chapter.

It's nice to see 1337 feature in it since he didn't get much credit and even though he was a non-canon Spartan, he deserved at least some recognition. Since is probably the only Spartan failures to still be a Spartan.

This seems rather interesting...although you should have someone look over the chapter first because I found some spelling errors, not enough to make it unreadable but just a piece of advice. Also you should slow down the story a bit and give more detail as to what people look like, what's going on, and to develope character, because all the chapters thus far seem way to rushed

Looking forward to your update. Thanks

this is an interesting and good story so far

afterward trainees follow.
use the right word.

Some of your words are wrong completely while some others are outright offensive.

just read till this chapter, i like it so far.
your last update was october 7, 2013. and its now may 27, 2014.
your A/N at the bottom said to expect bi-weekly updates and you would try and keep a schedule.
any plans to update soon, or it it going to be longer to wait for an update?
i want to add to follow story but i want to know you are going to update before i do anything.

So, does Harry get Spartan training and then go back to Hogwarts? That could be fun...

Good chapter

Not bad of a chapter and fic, I enjoyed it. Could have fixed the grammar a bit though and the spelling of some words also.