|Reviews for Would be Bluebird|
| SparkleSwan chapter 1 . 4/14
Holy crow. I thought I'd read you before but maybe it was a contest that I reread here. This. I can't put in words how beautifully horrific this was. You are undoubtably one of the best writers out here. I've been reading a long time and I'm not sure that I've read anything as powerful as this.
Thank you for this and your other stories. I've loved them all.
| sunfleur chapter 1 . 2/14
| starfishfairy chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Wow, Honey, that was so beautifully executed. Thank you for sharing a part of your imagination with us.
| Alice the now br chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Oh my god bitch. You done gone and made me cry. That was so morbidly beautiful I felt like someone was trying to pull my heart and soul out of my body as a warning not to continue down that dark and foreboding road. I did anyway, and it will always scar me and give me a new outlook on many things. You are cruel and deliciously fucked up girl. Oh geez where are the tissues T.T
| TheSaintsMistress chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
LMFAO! I voted for this fic on TLS's Angst Contest. And...I'm guilty of thinking it was a B&E fic too! You got me! ;)
Loved it then, still love it now! One of the saddest most awesome o/s's I've read to date.
| Honeszt chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Holy fucking shit.
I'm in tears. Your words are seriously something strong that hits me right where it counts the most.
My heart was pounding and my stomach was bracing itself as I read through this.
Realistic is an understatement. I felt it.
Where the fuck have I been that I'd never read any of your work before?
That probably shouldn't matter, but from now I'm a dedicated reader.
Just.. Thank you.
| runtagua chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
For the girls.
| insanemum chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Oh Bee. That was just about as painful as I imagined it would be. I don't know how you do this - I'm just really glad you do. Going off to find a tissue now...
| Rita01tx chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Absolutely heartbreakin' that Edward came to such a pass in the first place and, even worse, took Bella to that same dark place and beyond! At least they are both well out of it!
| SparrowNotes24 chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Every word blew me away as they always do. I've re read this more than once as it's so SO beautiful and painful, and it hurts more every single time. You deserve all the awards and more because you are one talented lady. The fact that it was originally Alice and Bella makes it all that more special.
This little story is one I will never forgot.
| islesme20 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
At 8:54 in the morning today I am bawling my eyes out having read your story. I can't get over it. With no dialogue in there, you pulled me in so deeply I can't help but be affected by it. To be able to describe everything so vividly, you must have experienced it or something close to it, or touched by seeing someobe else go through it. Wherever the inspiratiob came from, I hope that you're ok. And I pray to God that you continue to write because you have a gift and ..."I would follow you anywhere". Thank you for writing this story.
| BelieveItOrNot chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
This was one of the few stories I read in the angst contest (angst is my least favorite genre for reasons, lol)
This one was such an ugly subject so beautifully, lyrically, and poetically executed.
I wish my stomach had the strength to read this a second time so I could be more specific in this review. I can tell you that on my first read there were many moments where a string of words just took my breath away.
You're a very talented writer and I hope you keep doing it.
| Heatherl8367 chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Boy oh by sista...you brought the angst. Beautifully written, dear. xoxoxo
| sfspeedy chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
This was so in your face, so raw and memorable. Images and words floating in my head. Can't stop thinking about it! So well written! Thank you!
I'm Glinda Good Witch Oz (on Facebook).
| staceleo chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
You are brilliant. I cried and I loved it.