Beautiful.

So, this probably won't even make sense because I'm a blubbering mess right now ... But this was absolutely amazing. Everything you write is amazing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us ... I'm going to go sob in a corner somewhere ...

Brava! Absolutely wonderful piece all around and one I know I will return to countless times in the future. Thank you for sharing.

I so enjoy when I find a completed story and yours was very good. I had to stop reading before bed because I didn't want to stop reading it. Your story was compelling and enjoyable. I look forward to reading your other work. Best wishes, Jill

My goodness this is wonderful

Lovely, well written story. Best AU Rizzles sorry I have ever read. Change the names and this could be published. Thank you for sharing your baby.

I've read this story so many times and Maura calls to mind a 10,000 maniacs song callled trouble me. The lyrics are spot on to how Maura acts. Lovely story.

So sweet.

i usually dont comment on stories. but this was incredible.

I don't have words and usually I have a lot of words. That was beautiful and well done. Thank you for sharing it.

Beautiful. Very well done.

That was a truly incredible story. Words fail me at how much this story moved me. Thanks for writing it.

A beautiful story.
I accidently read the epilogue first and then started the story...but it still works and is very powerful
Well written, great plot and characterzation

wouah! je viens de relire cette histoire , des larmes a a fin bien entendu, magnifique, continuez d'écrire, Jane et Maura semblent si vivantes...N'abandonnez surtout pas!

My God that's so sad :( Being close to someone that you love, having to stay away :( If I were Maura I'd be broken, really.