OK, I actually may have read this all the way through, but had forgotten that this was all one singular story. I love it, more than the last time, and will likely love it even more the next reading.

I love this, everything about this chapter, the tieing up of all these loose ends, the letting go of her anger at Angela, of letting Katherine go.

OMG - OMFG - What? What did he say?

This one had me holding my breath the entire chapter.

heartbreaking. I know Maura can put Jane back together and Jane can put Maura back together, and I hope they can (with the girls) rebuild their family, stronger and more loving than before.

I think this is where I stopped reading the last time. It was too triggering for me then. I am holding out hope that everyone is okay after it is all over and that the family that deserves so much happiness is able to find that.

This is making my stomach fall - I so want the happy ending they all deserve, and it is absolutely heartbreaking that they have to face this at all.

Oh shit. oh sit shit shit shit shit. This has me so on edge!

I like that you interject the everyday routines and slices of life into this horrific scenario.

Wow. This chapter is intense. I know from my earlier reading it gets even more intense, adn I want to read it all, devour it.

oh GOD! oh nononononononononononononooooooo - JFC - no. another apprentice. nooooooo.

God damn it! I'd read this before, and forgotten about this part. Maybe in the back of my mind I knew it was coming, but this is just so crappy for them.

I like that Maura puts the brakes on the physical aspect of their relationship on Katherine's day, and I LOVE how protective she is on Thanksgiving.

I am amazed by the depth of character you have here. The wonderful fleshed out humans you are writing, and It could be any other people and I would still understand exactly who these two are, and where Jane is from and what drives her.

This entire chapter had my stomach in a knot, but in a way I need to be.