that was awesome

Oh my god, the last few lines of ch. 10, breathing in and out, heartbeats in synch...it's so beautiful. You are a true artist. Your words are art.

Love this story. It diffently kept me reading. Thank you

So touching and so much love. ..and I want to go to that island. ; )

Bloody awesome story!

WOW! i cant say anything more than that. So beautiful. Just WOW!

Perfect... Pure poetry!
I have to read it all over again because I already miss them...

I can't wait to read some of your other stories..

I kind of feel with this one like I did with The Moment. It was hard for me to write a note on the final chapter b/c it really means it's over. And that's so sad. But what a wonderful thing. Loving something so much that it gets to hurt you when it's over. That's pretty special, and you somehow do that again and again with your pieces. This one will always hold its own very special place in my heart. Thank you so very much for sharing it.

Wow, I spent all night reading this. I had planned on reading one or two chapters, then read the rest in the morning, but once I started, I couldn't stop. Very beautiful, very heart and gut wrenching, very sweet, very moving.

It took me a very long time to get to this. So good. So perfect. You're amazing.

Wow jst wow thank you that was ecip! I love it so much

Love this story! I couldn't put my tablet down and dreading finishing it. Thank you for sharing it. Bravo

Just brillian. Thank you so much for post it here for us to read it.

Gah amazing

Wonderful story!