|Reviews for Half the Man I Used To Be But Twice the Man I Was|
| Obscured Angel chapter 21 . 22h ago
I really enjoyed reading this story and do hope that you will continue it in the near future.
I love the awareness you gave Jarvis, Tony's disability and the fact that no one know who Iron Man really is. The plot is fantastic and the writing is amazing. The social interactions are believable and everyone stays in character through out the story. Furthermore, the Tony and Jarvis interactions are made very clear through the use of italics or other means, I never felt any confusion.
This story is absolutely perfect, and the themes are some of my favorites.
Thanks for writing and posting, it's truly appreciated.
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/28
For the love of God, man. Update!
| Athina Dark-Angel of Death chapter 21 . 2/18
I think this is great. Will the team eventually figure out that Tony and his AI are in charge of the suit (even if its a very long way away eventual)?
| Young chapter 21 . 2/17
I'm honestly in love with this story. I feel like there should be a moment where the team finds out who ironman really is. Or something. It's up to you, kind author. Please update soon!
| Booklover2526 chapter 21 . 2/9
Aw the end scene was so cute.
| Wanderingidealism chapter 21 . 2/8
:3 "So that if the fate of the world depends on if i can save the princess,,,,"
I died with laughter
| Lollypops101 chapter 21 . 2/7
awesome work, like always. :)
| Agnomen Loki chapter 21 . 2/7
So much wow.
Another awesome chapter, I feel so, so bad for Tony.
This fic is amazing, you really do make me feel the emotion in every chapter.
| Harm Marie chapter 21 . 2/7
Liked this lots.
| Mystic 777 chapter 21 . 2/7
Not bad. :D One thing I wondered (even in the movies) is how Tony switches between external and internal speakers. Does he like twitch his pinky or something? Might be interesting to explore and something the others somehow catch on to. Thanks for the update!
| leoness chapter 21 . 2/7
Good stuff. I had no trouble telling when tony vs iron man/jarvis was speaking. I just wasn't sure how they were not being heard doing so. Did I miss that earlier on?
| thewriterstory chapter 21 . 2/7
This chapter is so sweet, especially with the Tony and Jarvis sections XD Continue soon!
| Cinderfire16 chapter 21 . 2/7
I like it. I actually think you should do more fays like this (not where Tony isn't doing well but you probably know what I mean) I like how you just had them take a normal day. Keep at it?
| Azile Signer chapter 21 . 2/7
I love your story it is adorable team bonding rules!
| Qweb chapter 21 . 2/6
I didn't have much trouble following the back and forth between Tony and Jarvis except When Jarvis started talking to the other Avengers. But I caught on fast.
I liked Jarvis mediating between Tony and Steve and Bruce the mother hen. He never gets to help - very insightful.