Reviews for 50 First Dates
jessy luke chapter 9 . 10/13/2013
Nooooo you can't end it like that. Maybe one more chapter to see the outcome. Good story
Aleena23 chapter 9 . 10/13/2013
Awwwwww, that was adorably wonderful! It was very sweet and lovely and i like the fact that they have a happy ending, and im sure charlie will be fine!well done, it was a great story one of my favourites ! :D
Mari Wollsch chapter 9 . 10/12/2013
sequel, please xxx
Guest chapter 9 . 10/11/2013
Wait, its done?
Aleena23 chapter 8 . 10/2/2013
oh my goodness, i was drinking in every word from the page, i cannot wait for the next chapter ! great job!
Flight2013 chapter 8 . 10/2/2013
Dangit, ignore my previous review, seems this stories gonna be wrapping up in a way soon. I'm kinda saddened that it went so quick, but it was indeed a great story.
-Flight
Flight2013 chapter 7 . 10/2/2013
Hmm, more mistakes in this one. I love how its turning out to be, I wish there was some more of Edward just having fun with a Bella who is kind of lost. That is fun to read. But I'm enjoying this as well.
Please keep it up, I'd be heartbroken if you stopped.
Don't change her TOO soon, I'm enjoying this lost/confused Bella thing. And I'm glad theres been no more Jacob ETC
Flight2013 chapter 6 . 10/2/2013
YOU WERE DOING SO WELL WHYYYYY right at the blooming end too!
"It's not entire uncommon for Bella to get a boyfriend," *entirely* :/
Great story, so sad I'm nearly at the latest chapter *sniffles*
I absolutely love it, love love love, its one of the best, better than almost everyone I've read (And I've only read ones with high reviews- 700 and completed) You've given me faith to read in progress ones again, last one I tried to read i got through 5 chapters before finding out she canceled it.
-Flight
P.S see how incoherent I'm becoming? Your making me crazy girl/guy, yeah what gender are you 0.o
Flight2013 chapter 5 . 10/2/2013
Hi again XD
I'll keep reviewing even though im ITCHING to read the next chapter
This one was good, I hardly noticed any errors. I'm trying to remember... Oh right.I very much love the idea of the donation thing, that was so VERY EDWARD!
Sorry, I can't comprehend a very helpful comment at this moment.
At the end you could have gone slower with the whole dating confession thing, it was a very special moment.
I STILL LOVE IT ANYWAYS, I'm sorry if I sound rude in any of my feedback, I'm just trying to be a helpful fellow author but its difficult to draw the line between crazy story loving fan reader and helpful author
-Flight
Flight2013 chapter 4 . 10/2/2013
Thankyou for a long chapter:
Same thing, missing words, although this chapter was alot better in retrospect to errors.
I hope that Jacob and Billy ETC wont be involved in this story too much, they take away from the conversations between Edward and Bella- I suppose I will find out, I still have 4 more chapters too read
BTW Spanish inquisition joke, FAKING HILARIOUS. You should add more jokes.
I hope you keep updating- i'm officially following now.
Love it, keep it up!
Flight2013 chapter 3 . 10/2/2013
I'm sad that this was a shorter chapter:
I very much like how you write their interactions.
Again you missed a few words- no spelling mistakes though
EG: "I'm sorry, am I the way? *in* :)
I suppose I hadn't really told you this yet- awesome story, I hope you get more reviews, even without them though know that your story is PHENOMENAL. I love the idea, please keep writing.
-Flight
Flight2013 chapter 2 . 10/2/2013
Hello, reviewing again as I know it inspires authors- as it does me.
I have to mention that this is the third story still in update section that I have bothered to read. I'm very glad that I did.
A few more pointers to help you out if you want to listen to them:
when you change days/ Bella forgets, make use of the divider (line) It will help with reading your story
Again a few places you used the wrong words/ missed some, no spelling mistakes that I saw. Nothing too bad that it would ruin the experience.
Also be careful of your tense- EG Begun not Began
Looking forward to next chapter
-Flight
Flight2013 chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
I very much like this idea. It's well written.
There seemed to be no spelling mistakes, however you messed up a few words. For example Exiting instead of Exciting. Not too much to fuss over though, may I suggest taking some time to explain the actions that she performs such as the chewing of the lip or wringing of the hands? It slows down the story. I use this type of writing often in my stories- per suggestions from reviews.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
- Flight
jessy luke chapter 8 . 10/2/2013
Wow amazing so far. I haven't reviewed before because I only just found this story. Can't wait to read more. Good work :)
Amandagold chapter 7 . 9/27/2013
i love this story! i've been waiting for a new chapter but it's not coming! whennnn?
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