|Reviews for Metastasis|
| J Chesney chapter 1 . 3/4
You know, I just KNEW I shouldn't read this story because it was going to make me sob. I do, however, love your stories so I read it anyway. Yes, I did sob like a baby but what a beautiful, realistic story. I think the point is that some people, while unlucky or unfortunate in having a devastating disease like cancer affect them, if they are lucky enough to have that one person, that one love of loves to help get them through life -regardless of how brief that time may be - then they just may be the luckiest of us all.
| FleurdeLysff chapter 1 . 2/11
I love this last quote that you wrote on here because I truly believe in it. I've heard that the other side of the veil is quite thin and our loved ones can sometimes reach us. Whether it's true or not, sometimes it really feels that way. What a bittersweet story. Thank you for sharing.
| kadronya chapter 1 . 2/5
so hard to read but I love that OS!
| Twi-Hearted1 chapter 1 . 1/19
Where do I even begin with my review? I am sitting in my living room at midnight reading this story with tears pouring down my face. No story has ever, EVER, made my heart break as much as this one has. Beautifully written. Bravo! BRAVO!
| mrsvixter chapter 1 . 1/6
so so real and very sad
very well wrote
| LizziePaige chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Oh my... This is a real tearjerker! I loved this so much, thanks for sharing :)
| KimiD chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I am NEVER one to read a story where either of them die... EVER, BUT, there was just something about your story that Dragged me into it... and even though I had a feeling it would end this way I couldn't Not read it. Very Compelling Heart Rending and yet Giant moments of pure joy rocked my world and made me love this all the more. And sweet mendings of the joy of her getting to keep a piece of Edward with her through their daughter, Superior! When Edward had complained about the tightness in his chest... I Knew! And he was so ecstatic when he asked her to marry him... somehow I had hoped that she would be left with his child and you did not disappoint! AWESOME WRITING!
| rubyblue9696 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
this was so so good...don't know if i told you yet here...so...mwa!
| Alice's White Rabbit chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
OMG. I just can't stop sobbing. This was so devastating but also so beautiful. So much of this was very close to home for me as I lost my brother to cancer this year. And, I just knew that when Edward was complaining of a cough, that this was not going to turn out with a 'traditional' HEA. But, it was happy just the same. She may have lost Edward, but she will keep a part of him in their daughter. And, he will always be in her heart.
Thanks for sharing this.
| Shadow Masen chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Oh my...that was heartbreaking and beautifully done. Thank you!
| cruiz107 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Snot crying is not attractive. Amazing freaking job.
| EnchantedbyTwilight chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I have nothing but tears. Seriously. I watched my daddy die of cancer earlier this year, but this. This was soooo heartbreaking because they never really got the chance to live. I was scared to read this because the pain is still very fresh, but I am so glad I did. You have entirely too much into this to not have experienced some of this - I hope I'm wrong but thank you for sharing this with us regardless.
| Robward17 chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Oh help me jeebus. I can't see & my heart hurts. WOW..just...dammit!
| sami69 chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Has I have sat reading this, tears streaming down my face. I have realised this is the most realistic piece of writing I have ever read in this fandom. It was beautifully written, and I wondered if you had or maybe a friend suffered in this way with your writing been spot on. I helped my best friend come through stage 3 breast cancer. The hardest part for me was when her husband phoned me and asked me to come round and cut all her hair when it had started to fall out. She didn't want bits falling out at random times. He couldn't face doing it. But I did it with a brave smile on my face. When I got home I sobbed so hard. Her hair was a pride and glory so I don't know how much she cried that night and there on after. Thankfully she is over the worst that was eight years ago, but I know like with either E or B, living with that feeling of will it come back has never left her. Thank you for this o/s I am surprised you don't have more reviews though. :)
| beachlover6453 chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
I can't remember when I ever sobbed (literally wracked with sobs) while reading...anything. The TLS Angst contest really did a number on me. The ASPCA commercials have nothing on this story! Outstanding writing and I can't wait to see what you come up with next! I was watch an old episode of Grey's Anatomy and the song Duet by Rachael Yamagata was playing. That song I think goes perfectly with this story.