|Reviews for They Don't Know About Us|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Hi!i really like your writing! UPDATE SOON! My only suggestion is make niall a bit sweeter because he is looking pretty abusive right now... BUT YAH THANKS I LIKE
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Zayn is from Pakistan so a more appropriate nickname would be Pakistani not Arab he's not Arabian... Get your facts straight.
| dragon fier 20 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
omg, why is Niall being soo mean? omg, i love this a lot, and i love how you make Zayn so different from how he really is... :D i loved it a lot, and i cant wait for more! plz update soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
You NEED to make more! I loved this it was amazing! And making Niall the bad one was just so Hawwtt. You really thought everything out and it fits all together perfectly, Keep it coming!
| ForeverUnited93 chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
I love this story, and I always love a dark niall;)
| KateDreamer chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
This is great! One Of the best I've read! I love how close Louis and Zayn are and how dangerous Niall is! You make him sound REALLY hot:D I really hope you make a second one because that would be awesome if you did! I would give you imaginary hugs and kisses!3 I've read all of your one direction stories and they are amazing and so well thought out and I was very excited when I saw this piece and the Lilo one shots because your just such a great author and I do mean it when I say it's one of the best I've read and trust me I read a WHOLE lot of fan fiction it's crazy:) But yes you should definitely write a second one it would mean so much to me if you did, because I mean I know it sounds a little personal but I read fan fiction a lot of times when I'm feeling lonely and this one just really spoke to me and the relationship between Zayn and Louis is incredible and it just makes me want a relationship like that! But thanks again for writing this it really did affect me, in a good way of course:))
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
This Story is great! I love the details and thought you put into it! I was very impressed, I've read all your other works and this by far has to be the best! I really hope you post the second part because I can hardly wait:) Great job, Keep It Up!