Reviews for Mind of Illusion, Eyes of Truth
catspats31 chapter 20 . 7/6/2016
While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Remove the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain on this site, or try to upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.
marimbagirl1993 chapter 18 . 10/16/2013
I can almost bet they're going to get interrupted.. haha.
marimbagirl1993 chapter 17 . 10/11/2013
Wheeeee, looking forward to the next chapter! I hope they go out in the next one :)
Yamiga chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
This doesn't seem like a story, sorry. And your character seems a little mary sueish.