Reviews for Asylum
Angelik Angel chapter 10 . 5/16/2015
If Masen is telling the truth Carlisle, I'm sorry Bella. Carlisle also has tattoos and black logo it has black wings equal to Masen... But the devil also said that Angela was bad for Bella and she was not. X
Angelik Angel chapter 9 . 5/16/2015
I messed up ugly, Carlisle is no angel or archangel, he's a demon equal Masen, but seems to be more powerful, I wonder if Carlisle can not have it, because it Masen already claimed and marked as such, he may simply want to destroy? Like, you can not be my then will not be yours? And Jasper so far not entered into history. X
Angelik Angel chapter 8 . 5/16/2015
New characters, I liked and who held her and amazed the shadows? It was Jasper? Because you described dirty blond hair and Carlisle is a light blond and speaking it, I think he and Jasper can be angels or archangels. The funny thing is the details of the similarity of Carlisle Masen, green eyes and talk whispering in his ear. X
Angelik Angel chapter 7 . 5/16/2015
Masen was responsible for the state of Charlie and Bella under hypnosis or she was instrumental of Brothers Masen. This is all part of what he knew and informed her when she died in the hospital that all she knew would change. Hope Charlie is not a demon in your body when wake up. Masen help her or can kill Bella and soul/spirit/essence.
Angela is an angel of quarda? I wonder if Angela wanted Bella to let Charlie go because they were archangels killed him to be contaminated with the side of the demons? They want to get Bella to be modeling or creation of the son of the devil? X
Angelik Angel chapter 6 . 5/16/2015
Bella killed Charlie (or something did) and is arrested or the asylum?
Angelik Angel chapter 5 . 5/16/2015
Will change and he can not stop ... it is because it goes to the asylum? X
Angelik Angel chapter 4 . 5/16/2015
It was terrifying, you describe and I feel like that at the movies imagining the scene, it seems to me that she stabbed some children and herself and someone gave him an injection and hung up. Now she must go to the asylum. That was what he wanted? It does not seem like she was shielding at all. Maybe she was becoming a young woman he began to bring those visions of his world gradually to her and now culminated. But he knows that she will go to a asylum after that, so that was what he wanted? I really love your writing is very good, I was holding my breath ruffled virtually every chapter. Poor Bella, it seems that his destiny was already set in the belly of his mother. XO
Angelik Angel chapter 3 . 5/15/2015
It seems to me that Renee went to hell, I wonder what she did to deserve to go. And I wonder what Angela believes in Bella and so did not want to tell the name in alley more because she said now? Supposedly she's wanting Bella recall what happened in childhood? Masen followed because it is everywhere collecting their souls to lead to hell, but then it is death? A Expectro? Demon? He has fangs like a vampire and sucks blood but have black wings as a fallen angel turned into a devil, so I still do not know what he is beyond child of the devil. Perhaps a version of the devil himself, lol.
Angelik Angel chapter 2 . 5/14/2015
He returned as promised, lol. I loved. X
Angelik Angel chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
In good, I'm loving her story, but I'm worried that you will keep writing or abandoned? It seems to me completely different from what I have read in this website is seems to be good. So you could let me know if this story will continue to be updated or if you gave up? X
ewards bella chapter 20 . 4/23/2015
This is such a great story I can't wait for more but I so hope Bella and masen stay together
awesomefairytale chapter 20 . 4/20/2015
So confusing this story
RogueX000 chapter 20 . 4/16/2015
please, please, please update soon, i'm too far gone to stop now
RogueX000 chapter 14 . 4/16/2015
RogueX000 chapter 13 . 4/16/2015
omg i actually suspected that Carlisle was Lucifer, started reading your story today, am already here, so freaking hooked, why do i get the fealing Carlisle is Masen's father or something, like Angela said Masen had been raised by an evil person, Bella sees resemblances in them both, they have the same tattoos, which Carlisle said were from is family line, and also, Masen know how to beat him.
i'm probably just being stupid here, but still loving this story so fucking much
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