Reviews for Avatar |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is that door that leads to “the power the Dark Lord knows not” really in the book and I just forgot, or did you just come up with that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... he's kinda messed up now, huh. Just sorta a tool for gaia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ima thinking Harry doesn't have alk the info, cause I don't even remember the film all that clearly, but he's still obviously advocating for the empire, less people would die? ...Great, then the living would die slaves with their homes destroyed? How is that better? Like, warning or not they didn't own the land that they went in and bombed, still not ambiguous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It can't ever be self defence if you walk into someone else's home to steal their stuff... I don't think this is as morally ambiguous as you think. The na'vi are gonna be justified in pretty much anything, especially since they're there to kill Pandora... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nah, assisted is stupid at this point, if it works efficiently then you've got the imperium of man, 'cause why wouldn't they do it to everyone the moment they could. You need other options, which are already on their way to working for societal reasons. And 'cause he's going to use those other options instead of this, it makes this extra pointless. He should probably mention the afterlife is real at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mam, shoulda put trigger warnings on this chapter, not the last one, waaaaaaay edgier. Except the obliviation thing, that just read as hollow competition 'cause their lives were soooo obviously much worse than his. Also, super confused what their plan was, they just raped him and then acted like normal. Was- did they just wanna do that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd call it obtaindium, on another note, that feels a little... more severe than dub-con when he has no context for the drug... and they're also not on it... Also really stupid on their parts, but that's another thing entirely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's fantastic story. Can't wait for next chapter ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooo I'm LOVING this story so far and I desperately hope to see it continued soon! |
![]() ![]() people arguing about race are usually racists on twitter or facebook that like to call other people racists |
![]() ![]() ![]() Growths? Normally that would be cancer, but I'm pretty sure it's Eiwa giving him the neural interface needed to connect. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lost me with the slash shit and experimenting lol. I was cool with the no pairing because most decent plots are ruined by them but thanks for the warning so I don’t bother to get anymore invested and then pissed off like most authors. You were heading towards a decent and fresh fix too. Good luck I’m out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ew. But, I suppose, I was warned. |
![]() ![]() This is interesting. Heap of angst on top of a naturally angsty Harry. And the infantilized Harry trope is a bit cringe. That said not bad at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy your writing, thank you for gifting us with it. |