Hate it. Instantly stopped reading when you left hedwig in the shop.

reread 4 times

Myrtles bathroom cannot be under constant scrutiny. especially if Harry's school years are canon. teachers didn't know about the chamber

Voldemort waving about a pink and lacy umbrella.
*roaring with laughter*
Fantastic!

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Poor kid.

He always gets screwed no matter the precautions he takes

Jesus.

Nice switch up to canon.

Good to see Harry reaching out to other wizards

Sweet

I adore his ability to cut with just a few sentences.

Minerva and Pomona disappoint. Filius surprises me (he missed what happened to Luna.) I can forgive Hagrid.

This whole story seems wrong. Yes, they could screw Harry over. But what about Pads

Nice descriptions

Clever

I like it

Okay, but now he must make friends with Hermione. He can't remain alone. They don't have to be a couple but they need each other.

(I am holding out for Luna, though I could certainly Lunar Harmony. Even Daphne and Luna if Hermione is a friend

Yeah, I know it's your story. Plus, you finished it.

Good to see him fighting back and standing up Neville.

After a certain point, he needs to stop takingit

Interesting changes to the characters

After everything Ron did to him, I don't understand the mourning