Reviews for Travel Secrets: First |
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![]() ![]() Im sorry but this is dumb. He's a full grown man but still has mommy and daddy issues & acceptance problems even though he helped win a whole fucking war against a Dark wizard. Like, writers like you set this knowledgeable character up to go back in time with a lot of his abilities and knowledge in tact but then, at the same time, you have him act like the fucking emotionally disturbed preteen that he is. There's no consistency with a character like that unless you are going to give them a Jekyll and Hyde complex I can't deal with this shoddy ass writing anymore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() Darnit! And to think I was hoping that somewhere at the end of book 1 he would give the philosophers stone back, as implied by the storyline, but oh well, it was a good story, aside from that, and I hop |
![]() ![]() Flamel is an interesting character. |
![]() ![]() This is getting more and more interesting. |
![]() ![]() Snape is feeling a little pity now. |
![]() ![]() The Quidditch victory was glorious. |
![]() ![]() I hope Harry wins! He has to! |
![]() ![]() I hate McGonagall now… then again, I’ve always thought she was overrated… |
![]() ![]() I want to slap the teachers at Hogwarts |
![]() ![]() Voldemort actually caring about Harry’s health, and having a rational reason to do so… LOL! But everyone shunning Harry makes me so mad, especially considering it could have happened in canon. |
![]() ![]() This is going to be an awesome fic. Scratch that, it is already. |
![]() ![]() Wow! I’m glad Harry stopped the pig tail incident in this timeline. I haven’t seen other fics do that. I hope Harry won’t hide his intelligence like he does in most similar fics. —that’s realistic but so, so frustrating to read. |
![]() ![]() Just the first chapter is so intriguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No. Nope nope nope nope nope. If he cares about Hedwig he adopts her. This entire story is null and void if he actually adopts this sort of philosophy. Will he not love Luna? Because she’s not ‘his’ Luna? Will he not care about Ron or Hermione? Why go back in time at all? I lost my cat, my best friend, two years ago. And if I could time travel you’d be damn sure I’d be living in a time travel loop with him for the rest of eternity. And he’d be my best bud every go around. So bring back Hedwig or I’ll... still read it anyway I guess. But it’ll be less enthusiastically. |