|Reviews for Travel Secrets: First|
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/28
Hate it. Instantly stopped reading when you left hedwig in the shop.
| Surtur2179 chapter 1 . 9/24
reread 4 times
| Surtur2179 chapter 12 . 9/4
Myrtles bathroom cannot be under constant scrutiny. especially if Harry's school years are canon. teachers didn't know about the chamber
| MaidensTouchOfMadness chapter 2 . 9/2
Voldemort waving about a pink and lacy umbrella.
*roaring with laughter*
| DeathDealer5241 chapter 4 . 8/31
| csheila chapter 16 . 8/29
He always gets screwed no matter the precautions he takes
| csheila chapter 15 . 8/29
Nice switch up to canon.
| csheila chapter 14 . 8/29
Good to see Harry reaching out to other wizards
| csheila chapter 13 . 8/29
| csheila chapter 12 . 8/29
I adore his ability to cut with just a few sentences.
Minerva and Pomona disappoint. Filius surprises me (he missed what happened to Luna.) I can forgive Hagrid.
This whole story seems wrong. Yes, they could screw Harry over. But what about Pads
| csheila chapter 11 . 8/29
| csheila chapter 10 . 8/29
I like it
| csheila chapter 9 . 8/29
Okay, but now he must make friends with Hermione. He can't remain alone. They don't have to be a couple but they need each other.
(I am holding out for Luna, though I could certainly Lunar Harmony. Even Daphne and Luna if Hermione is a friend
Yeah, I know it's your story. Plus, you finished it.
| csheila chapter 7 . 8/29
Good to see him fighting back and standing up Neville.
After a certain point, he needs to stop takingit
| csheila chapter 6 . 8/29
Interesting changes to the characters
After everything Ron did to him, I don't understand the mourning