Love it already! Wow. WHAT a blow to Harry! I can only imagine how betrayed he must feel.

Enjoyed your story and will be thrilled to read your year two.

Making Slytherins hate Harry for no particular reason is one the dumbest and most boring tropes in Slytherin!Harry fics.

I really enjoyed your story.

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Oh Harry, Harry, Harry... "Why wasn't the stone in Dumbledore's drawer under fidelius?"

Because the point of those 'obstacles' was not to keep the stone from Quirrellmort (if Harry hadn't interfered, Quirrelmort would've 'wasted away before the mirror'), but to lure HARRY into doing 'the hero' thing. Why else would Dumbles have given Harry that blasted cloak! Why else tell a school full of children, just after having Sorted the 'heroic BWL' about the mysterious and deadly 'third floor'?! Because Dumbledore WANTED Harry to find out about the Stone and pass the 'obstacle' course. An 'obstacle' course which just happened to have all the things Harry and his friends had just learned or were good at. An adult would laugh at those 'obstacles'.

I will never understand why people seem to think that Snape was wrong for thinking Potter was a spoiled arrogant brat because yes, Potter was spoiled and a brat in the books. Unless you know of any other magical kid who was gaped at during his Sorting, was cheered with 'we've got Potter' by the Weasley twins, had a teacher (Flitwick) fall of his footstool because he had The Boy Who Lived in his classroom, was allowed to keep an invisibility cloak to sneak around the castle with after curfew, was allowed - against the rules - a broom as a First Year, was allowed - against the rules - to play Quidditch as a First Year, had a personal (and rather weird) relationship with the Headmaster while the rest of the kids hardly ever saw the man, etc. etc.

Sorry, I just had to get that off my chest.

why do you write such childish stories . Go write some children storybooks instead.
constructive criticism: Go read the arrival of reaper if you need inspiration.

wheres apophis durng the meetign with harry and tom?
so now he knows they were muggles in disguise?

wouldnt it be more then 2 days since he sent the letter if he was in the wing for 4? and morning second free?
since the day after was qudditch match or a few hours later and he was in the wing for 4 days healing

hmmm yes harry bring snape to the grey side
why is he so for presering the old timelime and so deathly pale over quirrel?

he said take the cut with pleasure yet doesnt know he was hurt?
he been very childish and naiveite he couldn't trust hermione he did what he had to he inst going dark dark his speculative it varies person from person.

so he worrying albus over been more like tom
also why hasnt he tried ot talk to daphne since he knows future her?

why does harry think he cant do anything more to get sirius out of jail untill third year? so he didnt go to defence? but had charms instead? cause you have him goign to defense then when he runs into the older lions have him goign to charms only to say he going to defense? also harry taking a lot of shit and doing nothing about it why? also why doesnt he know why flint looking at him? they did make a bet after all wouldnt it be with quidditch and defence is were he is not unsure of himself?

why is harry shocked that in his past the fact he was a parseltongue is widely known? he used it in front of a vast majority of the school who would go around talking about it and are , plus thye could of infered from second year why he took so long under the hat, and why did he hate his sly side? i mean it a good thing, plus he been a bit biased to snakes cause of those he really shouldnt trust cause they are biased themselves.
also why is he behaving more like a kid then he should especially in his own mind?