Reviews for Travel Secrets: First
xTCatxx chapter 17 . 3/16/2019
OMG I LOVE this story thank you and can't wait to read the second part hehehehe
Undercover487 chapter 1 . 2/2/2019
Good series mate...
LavenderCloud chapter 15 . 1/31/2019
i have enjoyed this fic for a long time i have read it every 2-3 years, a clasic mean/unfair Dumbledore move, isolate Harry at the last minuet with points lost from his house. I'm rusty on this fic and have'nt read it since maybe 2015. I'm glad i found it again. You made a great point with the point loss and gain in cannon being unfair especially when all those changes where unexplained to the students. Well great fic. I will probably leave another review when i log in.
Rhgdg chapter 1 . 12/3/2018
It's a good idea but there is no explanation for his parents and Dumbledore being alive.

"... and Harry apparated them out of there..." who is the other person Ginny? Hermione?

Later when Harry and Luna (I think) are talking so, I have no clue who is talking. I only figured it out when they say each other's names

I didn't even bother to read the rest of the story.
Face Yourself chapter 12 . 11/14/2018
Wait, the last- you... you know that parseltongue is an ability found worldwide, right? And that Britain is just one of the most rare places for it to show up, since most of the family lines that commonly end up having it are in different parts of the world, where it isn't reviled or associated with the dark arts?
RipBudAce chapter 16 . 10/30/2018
A bit darker than I like my usual stories, but a pretty great read.
Hit1903 chapter 1 . 10/11/2018
are you sure you don't hate potter
all the students bullying him and even teachers joining them.
after the betrayal he is all buddy buddy with dumbledore even if it's for the day
there are also many more such things that don't simply add up
FotoDi chapter 11 . 10/5/2018

If Harry Potter was drafted for his “National” team...
Would it be for Wales? (Born in Godric’s Hollow)
Would it be England? (Lived ~10 years in Surrey)
Would it be Scotland? (Hogwarts is in the Highlands)

Do the four nationalities of Magical Britain each have a population large enough/talented enough to support four World Cup teams?

Obviously IRELAND has a world class national team.
(IRELAND will beat BULGARIA for the 422nd World
Cup on 25 August 1994 according to HP Canon.)
ENGLAND has to be a regular contender as they
have the largest talent pool & a huge fam base.
By his awestruck comment, your (AU) Oliver Wood
seems to believe SCOTLAND will be a strong
Quidditch threat once they draft Potter as seeker!
What about WALES? Is this proud but small group
just too tiny to yield 77 homegrown talented
Quidditch players? ~5% the size of England!

Your thoughts? I have always wondered.
SunPho3n1x chapter 17 . 10/5/2018
Such a great story! I feel bad for Harry not really having much of a support system in school, but at least he is old enough to see everything with an adult's eye and can handle it. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for writing this!
falsepermanence chapter 1 . 10/2/2018
i hate when stories start off this sideways, ridiculous, and confusing
vickety chapter 17 . 9/22/2018
Wow. This has been amazing!
RitzyKitsune chapter 1 . 9/20/2018
I wonder about Sirius, did they just let him be thrown is Azkaban and think they had died or did he know?
Madae chapter 17 . 8/30/2018
I’m so excited there’s more! Great story!
Madae chapter 16 . 8/30/2018
I wonder if harry has made Flitwick question his loyalty to Dumbledore. Especially McGonagall should be a little wary after finding out that Dumbledore knew Voldemort was in school. Great chapter!
Madae chapter 15 . 8/30/2018
Harry is not in a good spot! McGonagall is really pushing against Harry. Great chapter!
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