Reviews for Travel Secrets: First |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I LOVE this story thank you and can't wait to read the second part hehehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good series mate... |
![]() ![]() i have enjoyed this fic for a long time i have read it every 2-3 years, a clasic mean/unfair Dumbledore move, isolate Harry at the last minuet with points lost from his house. I'm rusty on this fic and have'nt read it since maybe 2015. I'm glad i found it again. You made a great point with the point loss and gain in cannon being unfair especially when all those changes where unexplained to the students. Well great fic. I will probably leave another review when i log in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a good idea but there is no explanation for his parents and Dumbledore being alive. "... and Harry apparated them out of there..." who is the other person Ginny? Hermione? Later when Harry and Luna (I think) are talking so, I have no clue who is talking. I only figured it out when they say each other's names I didn't even bother to read the rest of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, the last- you... you know that parseltongue is an ability found worldwide, right? And that Britain is just one of the most rare places for it to show up, since most of the family lines that commonly end up having it are in different parts of the world, where it isn't reviled or associated with the dark arts? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A bit darker than I like my usual stories, but a pretty great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you sure you don't hate potter all the students bullying him and even teachers joining them. after the betrayal he is all buddy buddy with dumbledore even if it's for the day there are also many more such things that don't simply add up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Question: QUIDDITCH WORLD CUP RULES If Harry Potter was drafted for his “National” team... Would it be for Wales? (Born in Godric’s Hollow) Would it be England? (Lived ~10 years in Surrey) Would it be Scotland? (Hogwarts is in the Highlands) Do the four nationalities of Magical Britain each have a population large enough/talented enough to support four World Cup teams? Obviously IRELAND has a world class national team. (IRELAND will beat BULGARIA for the 422nd World Cup on 25 August 1994 according to HP Canon.) ENGLAND has to be a regular contender as they have the largest talent pool & a huge fam base. By his awestruck comment, your (AU) Oliver Wood seems to believe SCOTLAND will be a strong Quidditch threat once they draft Potter as seeker! What about WALES? Is this proud but small group just too tiny to yield 77 homegrown talented Quidditch players? ~5% the size of England! Your thoughts? I have always wondered. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great story! I feel bad for Harry not really having much of a support system in school, but at least he is old enough to see everything with an adult's eye and can handle it. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hate when stories start off this sideways, ridiculous, and confusing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This has been amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder about Sirius, did they just let him be thrown is Azkaban and think they had died or did he know? |
![]() ![]() I’m so excited there’s more! Great story! |
![]() ![]() I wonder if harry has made Flitwick question his loyalty to Dumbledore. Especially McGonagall should be a little wary after finding out that Dumbledore knew Voldemort was in school. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() Harry is not in a good spot! McGonagall is really pushing against Harry. Great chapter! |