Reviews for Travel Secrets: First |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice |
![]() ![]() wow! just fucking wow! I admire your imagination! |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls update it was getting really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get the Obliviating Hermione sure he knows more Magic than most his age that isn't a crime and can easily be explained away by saying he had been training in secret outside of class and maybe been paying older students to tutor him |
![]() ![]() ![]() So other Teachers are taking points from him simply because he is in the wrong House? that is idiotic I very much doubt these teachers would care what house he is in |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the concept but the idea that the Ministry could force Harry to sign something like that is extremely silly because if they can do it to him they can do it to anyone and I doubt the people at large would be happy with the government having so much power over them |
![]() ![]() harry and malfoy are technically part of the black s family harry through his dads side draco through his mothersweasleys could aslo be releated but iam not sure how |
![]() ![]() james potter decides to be taught a lesson nearly killing snape severus in the shrieking shack bulling severus yeah teahc his father a leason also give slytherin a good name as well |
![]() ![]() harry potter wuld technically be considered a black and a potter and a slytherin not only because of tom marvolo riddle but also due to his grand mother dorea black nee potter so yeah possible and if a muggle born and a power full wizard of 2 families potter and black would produce a wizrd i feel this wizard should be grey nither black nor white but grey possible so it would be advantageous to bothe the houses |
![]() ![]() Have u uploaded it( |
![]() ![]() ![]() always nice to re-read old favourites. |
![]() ![]() Erm, as fantastic as this story is, you do know that Harry is coming off as incredibly stupid and masochistic, right? Plus he abandoned both Hedwig and Sirius, both of whom he supposedly loved in his previous life. He doesn't sound like a decent person. |
![]() ![]() This is all perfect revenge on Harry for abandoning Hedwig. |
![]() ![]() I disagree with the bullshit excuse for not including Hedwig but it's the writer's story no matter how wrong it is. |
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