Reviews for Travel Secrets: First
Surtur2179 chapter 12 . 9/4/2021
Myrtles bathroom cannot be under constant scrutiny. especially if Harry's school years are canon. teachers didn't know about the chamber
MaidensTouchOfMadness chapter 2 . 9/2/2021
Voldemort waving about a pink and lacy umbrella.
*roaring with laughter*
DeathDealer5241 chapter 4 . 8/31/2021
csheila chapter 16 . 8/29/2021
Poor kid.

He always gets screwed no matter the precautions he takes
csheila chapter 15 . 8/29/2021

Nice switch up to canon.
csheila chapter 14 . 8/29/2021
Good to see Harry reaching out to other wizards
csheila chapter 13 . 8/29/2021
csheila chapter 12 . 8/29/2021
I adore his ability to cut with just a few sentences.

Minerva and Pomona disappoint. Filius surprises me (he missed what happened to Luna.) I can forgive Hagrid.

This whole story seems wrong. Yes, they could screw Harry over. But what about Pads
csheila chapter 11 . 8/29/2021
Nice descriptions
csheila chapter 10 . 8/29/2021

I like it
csheila chapter 9 . 8/29/2021
Okay, but now he must make friends with Hermione. He can't remain alone. They don't have to be a couple but they need each other.

(I am holding out for Luna, though I could certainly Lunar Harmony. Even Daphne and Luna if Hermione is a friend

Yeah, I know it's your story. Plus, you finished it.
csheila chapter 7 . 8/29/2021
Good to see him fighting back and standing up Neville.

After a certain point, he needs to stop takingit
csheila chapter 6 . 8/29/2021
Interesting changes to the characters

After everything Ron did to him, I don't understand the mourning
csheila chapter 5 . 8/29/2021
It is heartbreaking and a tad extreme.

Makes you wonder how the teachers could act so professionally.
csheila chapter 3 . 8/29/2021

I always hate when he returns home
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