Reviews for The Law Is For The Breaking
Akrasian chapter 6 . 3/23/2014
Happiness! You've finished it.

With a happy ending. Colour me surprised.

Initially, reading this Fic was like peeling an unfinished scab off. It satisfies that deep itch for KiseXMidorima, but you know that the ending is going to be painful and raw.

And you're going to develop another scab on the same place. Its a vicious cycle.

Not that I'm saying you're story is a scab. Far from it. I'm just surprised that you completely went off the predestined conclusion and instead listened to your inner shipper by making it somewhat happy. If bittersweet.

Seems like there's a heart in there after all.

Thanks for the read. Checking out your profile after this.
Ginpachi-sensei chapter 6 . 3/22/2014
Great ending!
Stephane Richer chapter 6 . 3/22/2014
AHHHHH! I'm so sad it's over but I'm so happy it ended this way. You perfectly captured the awfulness of winter in Massachusetts! "Midorima wanted to crush him in his arms and put as much distance between them at the same time. He wanted to run but his lashes were wet." Just an amazing description right there. Thank you so much for writing this story; I really love the way you portrayed Midorima and Kise and their relationship throughout.
heya chapter 5 . 1/11/2014
this is so beautiful. i'm so happy you're writing this, because i think the fandom needs more of it. first i thought that kurobas was a manga about gay basketball players - and i was okay with that. but the more i read, the more i realised it is not just that. for me, kurobas is a manga about pysicologic damage, and how teenagers deal with it. yeah, it's always good to read about the aokise or kagakuro, but i think the fandom needs more angst. they need to stop focusing on the main ships, and start seeing all the conections between all the characters. your oneshots seriously make my day. thank you. and please, write soon, i can't wait to see more of it uwu
Stephane Richer chapter 5 . 1/11/2014
ahhhhh totally worth the wait! i really do like your style. too much narrative gets clunky really easily and this just kind of...flows.
I really like Kise taking the reins and pulling Midorin along. It's just perfect ugh, just the image of them scared and holding each other in the dark...
Monkey D. Writer chapter 4 . 10/22/2013
That last part... Kise kissed Midori-kun?! OMFG OMFG OMFG! *running around in circles randomly*

-MDW
Stephane Richer chapter 4 . 10/21/2013
Ahh it's beautiful as always. Why the time jump though? It's not a bad thing, I'm just a bit curious.
And I love the way you described his hands. You really have a knack for conveying a hell of a lot in only a few words.
Stephane Richer chapter 3 . 9/10/2013
Ahhh your metaphors are just so lovely.
Pokopen chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
This is so good. Please continue! With longer chapters maybe please please!
Stephane Richer chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
Oh man this is so gorgeous and brilliantly done. You convey so much over so few words-it's crazy, Part of me is like "no I want longer chapters!" but then it might not have the same effect, so please just keep doing what you're doing.
pSychedeliCoo chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
I'm kinda new to Kiserima (MidoSe or KiseMa? don't sound right, so I assumed, lol) but this is cool. Short and sweet and it makes me curious as to what will happen next. Too lazy to login tho. Keep on going.
Stephane Richer chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
This is lovely! I really like this pairing and the way you described them in parallel was great. I can't wait to read more.
Ginpachi-sensei chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Midorima likes porn?! Since when?!