|Reviews for A Little Night Music|
| goetzte chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
This is really very good. You have an adept grip on the English language. The content deviates from the LOK series, of course. I just wonder if it is true to the characters, though of course I can see Korra being rebellious enough to explore a speakeasy. I am interested in your use of present tense. Is the for the purpose of streamlining the action scenes? The pull away from the action to describe the atmosphere of the setting is also very interesting. One typo that I noticed in the sea of beautiful writing:"tickle hear ear" *her. You might want to change that.
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Keep it up,