|Reviews for More|
| Stormwhite chapter 1 . 1/24
I actually found this incredibly creepy - in a good way though. With a bit of tweaking and giving Alice's PoV it would be a really good obsessive-love piece - which is how I interpreted it in this case.
| FanficitonFan chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
please make a chapter 2 for this
| Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
Well fucking hell if I was turned after sex with her I sure as shit wouldn't mind one bit.
| babygirl2928259 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
| djsmith10186 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
That was actually really good. Though I'm requesting a sequel of some sort of what happens with them after Bella's change. I want to see more.
| SelinaShadow chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Lol I like it, you should continue it as a full on story
| SOS9494 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
| Bellice Fan chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
WOW...I LOVE IT! I would love to see more out of this...too bad it is only a one shot; but it was still really good. You always amaze me with your stories and your writing style!
| SOFisticated1 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Mad vamp-rape. Lol. Cute OS though. There needs to be more vamp fics again.
| FabPezBerry78 chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
| XxSmileForBeautyxX chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
awh Alice is in Wuv with Bella
| HomeByTwilight chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Well done! I like All Human Twilight a heck of a lot-I also like vampire fics-and I'm very pleased with this one-shot. Hopefully Alice and Bella can keep their room and start school properly next semester. Attend class, study, and hunt during the day; night time... that's for other things. All night. :-)
Thanks for the terrific read!
| ray-ber chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Sex and being turned in the first Chapter, wow where to now
| baddiemaggie chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Omg another chapter please!
| ADevlinGraceFan chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
its like..gone dark in the end but wow..you nailed it..oh men..its complete?..MORE!..
thanks for the read!