|Reviews for Makoto x Haruka- Love is in the Water (Warning: Dirty parts)|
| Yaoifangirl chapter 2 . 10/4
Do I even have to say it?
Massive nosebleed. I swear, I have 50 billion tissues here...
But I noticed some typos, but that's okay -everyone makes mistakes-
| shannon-kun chapter 1 . 7/8
this was amazing, good job, I wish I had good writing skills but im hopeless in that field, oh well :)
| canditheawesome chapter 1 . 5/14
Aww, that was so sweet, and not a detail out of place. Good job. (:
| yaoifangirlLol chapter 1 . 2/2
Omg, I'm not even a yaoi fan girl and I thought this was really hot and sexy. Good job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
| nagisanagisa chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
oh my god
| Laven-Soki-Forever chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Omg! That was so Kawaii! You deserve more views and reviews!
Am I weird cause I said that they having sex is Kawaii?...Ah whatever right?
| SuperLocked221 chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
one of the best haru x mako stories I've read, Awesome :3
| honeymama24 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
i'm so fluffy i could die!;
| maripas chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Awww what a cute ending _ I thought the story wasn't complete and since it was soooo old i thought maybe it wasn't worth reading because of the long time since it was last updated but I decided to give it a touch because as i always say, i like when Rin's somewhere around lurking in the shadows between Makoto and Haru. ) Thank you for writing!
| ashira23 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
| Arkist chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Omg I love this! Good job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I loved it but my english isn't very good so i had some problems with the vocabulary, that's not the point, please another part
| VermilionValentine chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
aww so cute! please let them have each other for just a little longer!
| AllenMoyashiWalker chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
That was so cute! Will you be writing more, or is it a one shot?