Reviews for The Last Spartan
OneDocToHealThemAll chapter 2 . 9/27/2020
Good writing so far but please, learn to spell „father“.
LeonaidasRage chapter 21 . 9/2/2020
Thank you!
Hope everything's going good now author :)
Hope the bullies receive my "FUCK YOU"s
ZelotArchon chapter 1 . 8/22/2020
Wouldn’t it be ‘reclaimed Jerusalem with the crusaders’ or ‘for the crusaders’?
typersnyder chapter 21 . 8/4/2020
Please update!
Callum Runchman chapter 21 . 7/29/2020
Such a shame you had to leave this account and story unfinished. I was so looking forward to seeing Artemis's reaction to their kiss at the end and what else would have happened during the rest of the war
himmmler chapter 2 . 7/16/2020
Please, i beg you to edit this. Father/Farther
Father-parent
Farther- comparative adverb for far
Guest chapter 20 . 5/25/2020
It's, uh, still up?
Llama gamer dude chapter 3 . 5/12/2020
You're taking so long to get to the point, just hurry up all ready, your just dragging ur story out, Jesus Christ!
CatLuver chapter 2 . 5/12/2020
Ya spelt Odyseus wrong, lol~
AwesomeWriter chapter 6 . 3/17/2020
yo, u have sooooo many writing errors. Like, im assuming ur in high school. but u still dont know how to spell father or definitely. Like, a countless amount of times, it says farther instead of father, and as for definitely, u just. spammed the f button, it literally says deffinantly. How stupid can u get, maybe handover the idea to a better writer, and leave fanfiction forever, cuz u. suck,
PercivalTheImpulsive chapter 21 . 1/24/2020
Hey I absolutely love this story and I was wondering if you could PM me your new pen name? I couldn’t find a way to PM you so I had to go this way. Great story btw had me staying up all night reading it.
NAME chapter 13 . 1/4/2020
I don't have friends they disappoint me.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2020
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Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2019
It sucks that Percy has such terrible scars, if that hadn’t been added the story would of been amazing. Just this got me immediately disinterested. He’s a warrior I know. Fantastic writing and story though.
Guest chapter 20 . 9/6/2019
Oh come on! Get a sword and chop those bullies into shit!
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