|Reviews for Champion of the Sun|
| JustALonelyDuck chapter 4 . 6/25
apollo and artermis's mother is actually leto, who lives on delos not olympus
| DawnScarlet19610 chapter 1 . 1/23
I think you failed to truly capture Artemis here. She was reasonable and understanding in canon, and here you make her really hateful and spiteful without any logic. Punishment for touching one of her maidens when Percy had permission, was helping save her life and was not inappropriate in any way makes no sense. She's not blindly cruel.
I was also disappointed with Percy's skills. A handful of arrows before he loses his strength and constantly running away from the Minotaur... Five years of training should see much better results, regardless of the young age. The purposeful encounter with the Hunters makes little sense plot wise and seems pretty random, which makes it a much too obvious plot device. There's also no way that Artemis wouldn't know Percy is a son of Poseidon from his appearance alone, which would cause problems. Also, you got Artemis' eyes all wrong. They're supposed to look two moons, not shimmering silver.
| halo4hire chapter 13 . 12/21/2020
Ares isn't THE god of war, he's A god of war. He is the Greek representation of the brutality of war, athena represents the strategy of war, Nike the victory, Eris the discord and despair, and Aphrodite Ariea the love caused by war. Ares is just the main deity of war.
| Sypho Dias chapter 4 . 10/26/2020
Dude seriously. Ditch grover. He's nothing but trouble. You're gonna get caught because of that useless satyr! For fucks sake...
| Sypho Dias chapter 3 . 10/26/2020
Oh for fucks sake just ditch grover you idiot! He's fucking useless!
| angela340278 chapter 16 . 10/16/2020
Love the story and looking forward to reading more like who was the voice that distracted him away from his mother.
| STORMRUNNERS chapter 1 . 7/29/2020
| OneDocToHealThemAll chapter 16 . 6/14/2020
Loved the way you didn't do shortcuts.
And lastly, Apollo is such a great character. Most of the time it is Artemis who gets a champion.
| Tash chapter 16 . 6/2/2020
YESS this was such a good read
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/9/2020
This is amazing! The whole story! Did you know it was on 20 of the best Percy Jackson fanfictions?
| CassieWolfe chapter 11 . 1/6/2020
Sunreaver in greek is Iliotropía, according to google.
| Caver Floyd chapter 15 . 8/9/2019
Good story, even if I don’t care for the idea of all those different gods/goddesses choosing to train him.
| PrincessMagic chapter 16 . 6/23/2019
Wow this has been brilliant! can't wait to read the sequel!
| lunadream13 chapter 15 . 4/23/2019
| Sylvia-Nightshade chapter 9 . 12/24/2018
This story is really good so far. I think the voice would either be Nyx, Erebus (the primordial of darkness), Tartarus or Anake (the primordial of inevitability), but I was just wondering, isn’t Clarisse’s hair brown?