Reviews for private pleasures |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there How are you? I hope I’m not causing any inconvenience. I recently read your story "private pleasures" and genuinely enjoyed it. I’ve been thinking about turning it into a comic in my style, and I believe it would be an exciting commission project. I'm confident you would also be pleased with the results and might even consider sharing it. As an experienced digital artist, I am currently open for commissions, and I would love to adapt your wonderful story into a comic format. If you're interested in commissioning me for this project, we can discuss the details further either in the general chat or on Discord. My Discord is lisakatagiri, and I’d be happy to chat about pricing, timelines, and how we can bring your story to life in a visually engaging way. Looking forward to hearing from you soon! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() stop using the word protuberance it’s corny. |
![]() ![]() Excuse me, I saw that your fanfiction was translated and published on a russian website. Did you give that person permission to do that? (Delete the spaces) readfic/ 8631966?sourcetab_author_works |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait... your leaving it here for the re-edit... I'm so sad. I don't know why I thought this story was completed. I'm so sad right now |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK here's something I don't get how is it that his secretary didn't recognize Reika or know who she was unless he fired his previous secretary or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. It's my second time reading it, but I noticed some inconsistencies such as the divorce papers, on one part it says Ryou threw them in a fire, another says he ripped them, but then Sakura grabbed them from his desk. Also in the beginning there are some details that get muddled. After those things are resolved this is a publishable story. I would make the affair between Ryou and Reika last longer, it ends out of no where like when did she get a conscience, was it the slap that triggered her? Just some things to think about. Though I love the story and the smut! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() was good until this unnecessary drama |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man sakura is getting on my nerves |
![]() ![]() Could you keep the old version and make a new story that’s the new version? Instead of revising and deleting the old story. I would still love to read the old one along with the new one. :) |
![]() ![]() You rewriting this fic right? Please, Reika has not received her karma yet other than feeling guilty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ryou and reika deserve to be miserable. Reika doesn't deserve forgiveness. Whatever she said, whatever her reason was, she was still sleep with a married man. Ryou was trash |
![]() ![]() Ohmygod this story is still rocking hope this gets updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so upset, I completely forgot that I've read this before so I started it over and only now realized that it was not finished. Please continue this. |