|Reviews for It Will Be Me|
| ec-writes chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Very sweet. I love Maes and his relationship with Elysia. He was such a good daddy.
There were two things in this that you might want to change, however.
Before he died, Hughes was a Lt. Coloniel, which is a much higher ranking.
Also, Elysia was three when her dad passed, so changing her age to something younger would make your story more canon.
Those really are just two little things, though. Again, very sweet story.