Reviews for Starting Over |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm trying... But the dialogue is killing me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... This is alright. but the Dialogue is to verbose and some of the exposition is unnecessary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Save sasuke? And just like that I’m out. Damn shame, I was really getting into this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() "expect the next instalment next weekend. (See I made a promise there so now I have to keep it.)" Hmmm this is a really long week... (updated 2014 its now 2022... are you okay?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() bit past the next weekend |
![]() ![]() ![]() please, do more |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was seriously a good fanfic, hope you update some day |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love you Sakura... but please shut up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nah, Naruto needs to keep that talking out loud habit of his in check. Like, I thought he was a sensor or something? Wouldn't he know if there were anbu watching him 24/7 |
![]() ![]() ![]() To bad it stops. You should continue the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta love the number one. Hyperactive, knucklehead ninja. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder...what rumors where there about Kakashis tests? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah yes...The sunset of youth... what makes this better is how clearly I can see the background of this happening in my head. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And so here we arrive at episode 1. This has been fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never thought about the fact that when the shgaringan copies abilities, it has to be active to use them. The explanations for the techniques in this chapter are something I would except as cannon. Well done. |