would love to see what happens to harry net and if his brothers find him and how they react to him and whats after him.

I’m enjoying your novel so far.
Can’t wait to read what happens in the next chapter

well that was embarrassing...for Harry i mean. would be fun to see the brothers meeting Dumbledore. obviously not happening but meh it was a good if a but confusing cause ik nothing of supernatural.

honestly I'm just waiting for Harry to magic these muggles

It'd be cool if you ever came back to this but I enjoy it regardless and have come back a couple times since my initial read, which was before you'd gotten to chapter 9.

why hasnt it clicked for harry that there are other types of witches? he meet other ghost now and the very much not dementor creature so? plus the brother only say witches never wizards and witches? plus like him not knowing their world they dont know about his, so he still assuming and making assumptions on whats going on. so he panicking not realizing that there other two sides that every piece of magic has a dark side even when he seen and witnessed it first hand? it always annoys me how little harry actually knows about his world like he should of looked into it and researched it not to the extend of hermione but still enough not to be so shocked and startled . the witches they kill arent like him shouldnt he of understood that from the hex bags power comes from blood? he got to stop with the pureblood mind set the assumptions and just talk to them ask them about witches since it clear they arent the type he knows ask them if they know about his kind or of the creatures he can say he read about. bungling things up? like harry at all any different the machine went off cause of the ''scar horcruxs'' a stupid thing that cant be real in canon regardless of what jk says the horcuxes would of done more to harry over the years would of done many things yet didnt not untill later why? jk didnt have the idea for it till later then rushed to add it., great now dean jumping to conclusions

harry in this is basically a pureblood harry assuming there is only what he knows and what he was told[ you would think he would do his own research during his hogwart years since adults lie ]yet allowing ignorance and arrogance and false superioity blind him? hasnt he been listening his brother called it a shtriga, shouldnt he guess there is more out there? he knows magic can hide and not always appear to be what it seems so why does he just think only wizard and witches exist?

Still hoping to see an update because I love your story and the character development is great. I really wanna know what happens to Harry after being kidnapped.

why would a crossroads demon be so interested in harry or just kill his relatives and not him

maybe he will get that his brothers care ab him

I love this. I must keep reading.

GREAT STORY! MORE PLEASE! THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK!

please update it is getting good thank you

thank you

Holly tomolly getting good