|Reviews for Two's Company|
| wildtrance chapter 7 . 11/5
I vote for Harry to read about the seals and going *blinks, rereads, leans back on his chair, "oh shit."
| MissiYoung chapter 7 . 10/1
I realize that I'm misinterpreting the contract pretty strongly, but I can't get over the thought that Harry basically enslaved himself to Bobby for a year of being treated like a human. My mental AU of this is picking tiny details and running with them, like the fact that Harry only takes time to eat/sleep when specifically instructed to do so because the contract is pushing him to do more and work harder. Once Dean's soul is saved Bobby will still have the rest of the contract time to use Harry as a research monkey as long as he believes it will help Dean (and Sam by extension). The fact that Bobby insisted that only HE have the power to break the contract feeds into this delusion of mine, turning the contract into something that could probably get Harry the Dementor's Kiss if it was done in reverse. I'm wondering if your Sam would have the same vivid imagination as I do were he to read the contract?
| WRose chapter 7 . 9/7
It really gets interesting. Please write more and update, keep going!
Perhaps Wand-magic doesn't function in America, perhaps focus magic in general doesn't( though what about hex-bags), but what about wandless magic? Harry could learn it?
Who knows if his magic isn't partly blocked by dumbeldork? Perhaps he will fall for Gabrielle once the contract is ripped up?
Harry has to block the weasleys and the school from his grigotts vault. Or they could take the money for the next year! I thought he would have already done that after thinking/reading the numbers. Best, get all keys "burned"/ all access restricted. It's just his trust fund right? Not the whole family vault?
| WRose chapter 5 . 9/7
| illachi chapter 6 . 8/17
kids have tetanus shots at 4, 8, 12 months. Then boosted preschool at 4 years and another booster at approx. 14 years. I think they're pretty well covered.
| MargaritaS chapter 7 . 8/15
this is very interesting so far, i look forward to more :)
| hotcat chapter 7 . 8/8
| LudicrusPlotts3881 chapter 1 . 5/26
Love the story, please update!
| VinniVVicci chapter 6 . 4/15
Lol, ignorance does not mean innocence
| VinniVVicci chapter 3 . 4/14
Yeah, this is pretty good for a foreigner describing American shopping and stuff-but I think the lady would've flirted with him as well , you don't just meet a proper English person everyday. Or, at least, I would've flirted with him XD
| Katzztar chapter 5 . 4/8
LOL at Jude crapping on the Impala! Post Owls are smart but seems the ones to like Harry are smarter than the norm ... and more territorial about their human XD
| Noradin chapter 7 . 3/15
The costs for Hogwarts seem incredibly off and unrealistic even (or especially) for wizards given what other prices you mention.
Simply unaffordable for anyone but those with enough money to force an exception for their families.
Given the pupils it has there would be severe cost cutting measures in many things if it had to keep itself afloat solely on student fees, so obviously most of its funds must come from other sources.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
shit fic don't read
| evfangirl98 chapter 7 . 1/4
| DreamFeathers chapter 6 . 9/23/2016
I just LOVE this story! :D there's just a certain easy going swing to the rhythm of your writing that makes it a real pleasure to read this.
I know it's been a long while since your last update, and that you might have abandoned this particular story, but i hope that you wont give up your pen.