Reviews for Shadowed Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this fits perfectly with lofi |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing amazing story. I really like the way you portrayed relationships and growth. I am glad that you didn't go the romance route as that might have felt a bit rushed. thank you for writing this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading your story a lot. I loved your ideas about it and you had in my opinion really great characters development in it. I agree with you that it’s better ended without being there a love partner, you focused more on family and friendship aspect which is just as important as any other kind of relationship. Thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() Simply amazing. Well done, and thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I so hate that that she's just calling sasuke nichan knowing that it might not be what sasuke is comfortable with. She's getting a bit annoying with the whole nichan business |
![]() ![]() ![]() On one hand her reluctance is a good thing. If she just blindly only followed Naruto around you'd end up with 2 copies of each other capable of only being able to use the same techniques and therefore easily countered. By having her ultimately able to do and focused on things other at the start she gets to develop a completely different way. Besides eventually her boys will pound those thoughts of her silly head and she'll learn them anyways. Though I completely understand her not using shadow clones the same way Naruto does. He's got the right type of tactical for using them in such a unique way. On other hand Kurama is right. Even if she doesn't use them for combat the same way she can still actually use them for learning information xD plus as a tracker she'll use them in the way they were meant to be used as infiltration and information gathering tools. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just assumed it was Kakashi latching onto Sasuke as an excuse now that it was properly viable. Obviously he's fucking up a bit cuz his other two genin ain't happy with him atm either. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My clans better than yours. We lasted longer? Oh really? Is that why it only took one person to kill yours but multiple major villages to kill ours? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh, first time I actually finished Sadowwd Sun! So happy I found the time to binge it! haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read a great number of your stories years ago, DarkPetal, but somehow this one slipped past. Now at the end of it, I can say that my only regret is that I didn't read it sooner. I'll be certain to make sure I haven't missed any other stories of yours now that I've finished Shadowed Sun. So thank you. Thank you so very much for writing such a fantastic story and for providing me with joy and entertainment at a time when I really needed it. Till next time, whenever that may be. |
![]() ![]() How old was he to be so infuriatingly cowardly and needy of attention? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible story, really amazing Thanks you very much for your time, to have writting this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is definitely another favourite of mine when it comes to your story endings~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is long past but praying he isn’t the romantic pairing if there is one. Cool reveal and all but… yeah. (Low-key started shipping Miwako w/ Kurama at some point and I don’t know how it happened lol) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck that had me full on sobbing |