|Reviews for Shadowed Sun|
| August Gingersnap Bee chapter 14 . 7/2/2020
I’m gonna be honest here, the way you wrote Kakashi in this situation, hurts. It hurts so bad. But I also know that if Miwako really existed, this would certainly be one of two ways Kakashi would act in this situation. He takes the avoidance route so often when faced with issues and things he doesn’t want to deal with emotionally. So I understand why but I’m also crying.
| Yuuki.Irie chapter 40 . 6/25/2020
i did not finished this ff yet. but i want to expose my gratitude for author-san for making this story. i admit, it really rare to find oc that died at a very young age. i love to read time travel story. yes i really love. there is some oc that i found interesting, such as kasa mon, kyo, kei, sister to obito that i forgot her nama and manymore. im glad that u change her name to miwako bcause i found it too cliche.. hehe sorry for the other author but that the truth. as a person that read many naruto time travel story, sometimes i felt bored, with the almost similar how the story flow, start from Wave arc and bla. so feel relieved when sometime skip the part in Wave arc. and thanks because u make some light for the character that i not even know. thanks to you i found anbu kitsune really handsome tho. just, i felt a bit down when there is little interaction Miwako and Tobi. seriously i want to see their interaction hehehe. Idk why i get hype at Wave arc when she henge into Tobi. i felt like, hei tobi, look at her, she know you. arent you curious?
I want to suggest some naruto story, but i only know the time travel genre. *sigh* oh i know one, other that genre. but i think the story is in bahasa. later i will check it for you. but i think, u cannot understand in bahasa, right? bahasa indonesia. even though im from mlaysia, but story in bahasa indonesia fit me more to read. because when i read in my own language, i felt double cringe. not formal. i need the formal one. really tho. also applied in indonesian language, i wont read if there any local accent in there. damn cringe. not that i hate or what, just i cant control myself. sorry indonesian readers, i just want to express my feeling.
there is one story, time travel genre, really popular, Of The River And The Sea. The story tales about a kunoichi named Ryuishi. It is a great story, really. just to inform, if u doesnt like dark or political, this story is not for you. Aside from that, they are great. what else hhhmm? i know some story from wattpad. called Forbidden Scroll if im not mistaken. story about Sakura travels to Warring State. yeah i really love this. but it not finished yet so hm i just wait until it finished.
i think that for now. idk why i write this long. i rarely to write any review. and spill what i felt. and i read some of your commentors in review are not appreciate ur story doesnt mean the others not appreciate too.
hey guys, wake up. critics is okay but dont cross the border. the writers write what they imagined. just be thankful bcause atleast they provide us the some wonderful literature to read, to fill our boring time. especially when during this corona. this literature u cant find in any bookstore. they are so precious. maybe the story sucks because the writers are too young, or newbie? who knows? and Darkpetal exactly a pro one bcause she or he has published many stories, right? put aside the grammar or what. that was minor so dont effect at all. so the reviewers, please, comment nicely. if want to critics, also nice but in a manner way. she cant fulfil what u desire in the story. if u denied that then make ur own story. the end
| Yuuki.Irie chapter 31 . 6/25/2020
srsly author san. u almost make me got heart attack. i think she was rape and i felt really2 down. like seriously, i cant accept this. then when u hint it that she lost her womb, i felt, aahhhh. just thanks god. only her womb. i cant stand if she was rape. i will hunt down hidan if he rape her. miwako is our baby he cant do thisssss
| Yuuki.Irie chapter 3 . 6/24/2020
author san, u really make me crying. congrats for the charcter buildup. really touching n really make me sad and cry over again. i can feel what her feeling like bcos we r same
| Sprengkamp chapter 45 . 6/13/2020
Th for the chapter
| pwtcmcneil chapter 45 . 6/11/2020
end bit: I have never seen such beautiful character development in a fanfic before, it was absolutely amazing, what started as an interesting premise became something I never expected. Thank you so much for giving this to us.
| pwtcmcneil chapter 43 . 6/11/2020
holy sh!t it just gets better and better.
| Kage-Shino chapter 15 . 6/10/2020
| Kage-Shino chapter 11 . 6/10/2020
I mean... Temari IS a fan girl?
| Kage-Shino chapter 9 . 6/10/2020
I could have sworn he was younger than them. I think he'd be her otouto.
| Kage-Shino chapter 7 . 6/10/2020
| mddomene chapter 7 . 6/7/2020
I wanted to see Miwako's ninken... she has had he for a while, but nothing came of it?
| JustDusty chapter 41 . 6/5/2020
dammit i was really hoping you wouldn't completely copy canon. you made an OC and you still ignored him just because you were too lazy to change canon
| JustDusty chapter 21 . 6/5/2020
for fucks sake is this a normal fucking sentence : " I wanted to hurthurthurt him the same way he hurthurthurt me because it stungstungstung so bad.
It wasn't fairfairfair" ?
i want to rip my fucking hair out i don't know if this is is your way of trying to make the fic as long as possible but its obnoxious. you literally fill up every other chapter with one fucking sentence
| JustDusty chapter 18 . 6/5/2020
This is starting to piss me off. she functions only on her emotions, no logic and she has no empathy, her constant hypocrisy and the way you keep repeating words like killkillkill scaryscaryscary hurthurthurt and the stutter it's like the MC is psychotic and it's getting on my nerves. you have to change this. this is a shinobi and the way you described her past life she doesn't even seem scarred, it's getting ridiculous