Reviews for Shadowed Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Favorite holiday is Halloween because of all the spooky things, plus it's in the fall, which is my fave season! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd say this is amazing. I totally enjoyed my time reading this. It is a bit annoying for me when Miwa being all angsty, but I definitely understand it's important for the character development, not to mention in the first place she was dead when 11 years old. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEAHHH I KNEW IT, KITSUNE-MIWAKO IS THE SHIP My tiny heart had been cheering for them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the drawing attention to her thing us bullshit. they already think she's the fox and most ninja that are important dont care and the hokage would protect her. having her purposefully be average is a bad excuse and makes for a boring story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story, but now that I'm rereading it again I just can't stomach how Miwako cripples herself all the god damn time for sentimental nonsense like worries of "copying" people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. I don't like seeing kurama like that. Though it's only because I didn't watch Naruto AND before this I just read a fanfic with a good (if insisting on exploding cities for fun is good) kurama. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wh |
![]() ![]() Sasunaru, Sasuhina and reader x sasuke |
![]() ![]() Cheese cake, crapes and thin mint girl scout cookies |
![]() ![]() Cuddling |
![]() ![]() I can tell we're this is going and no |
![]() ![]() pretty good in the beginning, the later parts became super confusing and perspective jumps were weird and at some point I just didnt know what was going on anymore. Also everything became simpleminded probably to quickly finish this. The ending was good enough. Just way too fast and many important scenes were missing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I'm going to have to drop out of this fic. It's not awful by any means, but incredibly inconsistent. Like, in chapter three she signs the dog contract and through chapter nine it literally hasn't been mentioned again. Not the dogs, not the contract, nothing. It makes zero sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve never written a review on a story before, but this masterpiece deserves one. To sum up my thoughts on the fic, this is the closest to a perfect fanfic I have ever read. The character building is better than nearly every piece of literature I have ever read. My largest pet peeve in fics is easily grammar, and despite the occasional slip up, I simply didn’t give a damn because of how phenomenal the story was. |