Reviews for Shadowed Sun
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2020
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
zealous soul chapter 45 . 10/3/2020
WTF! You said there's going to be romance! She didn't end up with anyone except a slight hint of Kurama x Miwako. It was still not enough. I expected for Miwako to end up with any Naruto characters or Kitsune/Gen but the ending was a total let down for me. All in all, the story was good but since there is no romance then I won't put this to my list of faves. What a total let down of a story fic.
PenileBrakes chapter 9 . 10/1/2020
Gintama is the funniest anime to ever exist, no questions asked
Guest chapter 45 . 9/19/2020
THIS IS AMAZING STORY!Thank you very much!And I accept Kurama/Oc ,he knows about her past life and it is important part of any 's the best fanfic you've written!Thanks!
Li-Ion78 chapter 18 . 9/18/2020
PLEASE im sick of the wallowing im internally screaming LMFAOOOOO
Li-Ion78 chapter 8 . 9/18/2020
That was unnecessary provation tho? Ugh feelings are hard to understand
Guest chapter 15 . 9/17/2020
:( it seems, from your authors notes in these chapters, that you’re frustrated by the reviews you had been receiving. I’m sorry about that. You don’t deserve the criticism, imo. I can see how every choice you made makes sense, story-wise, and even if kakashis choices have been upsetting it’s obvious they’re SUPPOSED to be and you have a wider arcing plan, you know, a long term development motivating that plot. You shouldn’t feel discouraged by the feedback. People are dumb.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/17/2020
This is quickly becoming my second favorite naruto fanfic. Nothing so far has surpassed DOS but giiirrrrl keep it up and idkkkkkk

Something so satisfying about a powerful ass OC. DOS sometimes...lacked that.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/17/2020
Wow. I really enjoyed this chapter. Like, a lot. I loved the way she broke things down between them. Like, lay down all the cards face up. The only way to move from here is forward. She left no room for secret resentments to fester. They’ll be more likely to let one of the others know EXACTLY what bothers them, should it come up. They’ve agreed to start out truly working together.

The part about her earning sasuke that it might SEEM like they are advancing faster was... unexpected. And soooo clever. Like who knew communication could be so damn effective? Lmfao. This type of communication would have gone a very long way, even in canon. Damn. I love this. so much.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2020
Just read this few chapters but seriously if you sooo afraid your OC is mary sue or too strong just make her reborn as civilian girl not Naruto's twin dammit. You make your OC really pathetic with lame excuses when she can be strong enough.
ManticoreBlues chapter 14 . 9/6/2020
don't know why people are complaining about your characters, I mean I can't say that your characters are exactly canon but they are close and they aren't necessarily non canon either. if I had to describe the characters I'd describe them as what you probably see the canon characters as
Kronus96 chapter 45 . 9/4/2020
This is a terrific story. I was not too fond of many of your decisions, but I can see why you made them and respect them.

Positives first.

Miwako is a good character. Her strengths and weaknesses were outlined well. Her relationships with others were a joy to read, her back and forth with Kurama and Kakashi stand out. While her decisions were frustrating at times, it's understandable why she made them. She's not a sue.

Miwako's mission with Minato was great. The epilogue tied up everything neatly. Seeing her dream fulfilled was a beautiful thing. Kurama was perfect throughout this entire story.

I felt for Kitsune; it's probably for the best that Miwako doesn't have a romantic partner.


Sasuke and Naruto were such a huge part of Miwako's story; then, they kind of did everything offscreen. For much of her journey, Miwako went behind her team's back. I was hoping, given the strain it had on her, she might work through her tendency to do things alone, but the story went in another direction.

This isn't a criticism of the story, and it's just something important to the story that should be noted. Naruto not being willing to leave the village, even though Miwako wanted to desperately, isn't in-character for his canon self. He loved the Leaf village in the manga and was somewhat blind to its faults; he took Nagato's story to heart, even though he rightfully hated Nagato.

Naruto actually hated the Leaf Village as much as he loved it as a kid. Naruto mentions hating the villagers while fighting with Gaara in Part 1. It’s mentioned during his struggles with Yami Naruto in front of the Waterfall of Truth too.

In short: this was a great story. I mightn't have agreed with the direction the story went in, but you did fantastic work.

Rating is 8.5.
Thanks for writing.
StoriesMakeLife chapter 5 . 9/3/2020
Pretty cool! Especially Kakashi's reasoning of not wanting to take care of theoretically-precious kids because he indirectly killed three precious persons already.

Miwako being put on the same team as Naruto is nothing short of dumb.
Sorry, no way to sugarcoat it.
But too much risk of losing both jinchuuriki at the same some mission outside the village.

Sad to see such a break of logic, common sense, ninja sense and everything.
euphoriix chapter 6 . 8/20/2020
I love how Kurama is a warning
Gammily chapter 1 . 8/17/2020
Love it so far!
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