|Reviews for A Baby Adventure|
| Pichufan chapter 11 . 10/26/2013
Nice story so far.
One question: She waved to whom?
Misty? Is that an error or did I over read something?
Anyways keep up your work and have a nice day!
| Airenee chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
So far so good. The baby pokemon are cute. I got a little confused as to which pokemon was Blue. I just had to guess the Riolu. Also, as a friendly suggestion, can you separate the dialogues into a different paragraph? It's kinda confusing who was saying who.