Reviews for Tonight, the Foxes hunt the Hounds
Salovi chapter 2 . 3/14/2015
Their reunion was so beautiful! My favorite paragraph was the one that started "His crossbow slipped out of his grip." But really, I loved them all!
Sarah-Sage chapter 2 . 4/4/2014
Its beautiful!
TheRealSonia chapter 2 . 8/30/2013
You're a phenomenal writter.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
I love this version a lot better (:
Ravenesque2 chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
Much more beautiful and meaningful than what the show gave us. I loved reading this from Daryl's POV. And for some reason, it means more that they didn't kiss as soon as they came together. Loved it.
peonies01 chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
Wonderful! Really wish things went down this way in Hounded! Your writing is fabulous!
cindergal chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
Love this! Yay for happy endings!
ImOrca chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
Oh goodness! That should have had a "fluff" trigger warning :-). Haha! Daryl, you big literary softy.
Fairies Masquerade chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
Excuse me whilst I fall into a sobbing, dribbling puddle of joy. This was GORGEOUS, Muse. It ran the whole gamut from terror to angst to heart breaking joy. Just... PERFECT. I loved it.
serpetinefire chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
I think it was beautiful and perfectly them. Still a little awkward but with a lot of heart.
Equal-Opportunity-Reader chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
. . . .I'm gonna cry by the end of this aren't I?
twinkyhoho chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Hey dude!
It's been a while since I have review one of your stories, it surprised me when daryl was referring to different english terms when thinking about his own life. It was a nice spin and I would imagine daryl would be into that sort of thing. I could definitely buy into him being a "closet poet" as it were.
The sentences flown very well as if it were rehearsed a hundred time to that perfect sweet spot of not being too over analytical, and not to oh-lets-just-put-every-word-that-comes-to-mind type of writing.
The title caught my attention because you know me! :D I am just the hugest fall out boy fan and I just HAD to read it :3
You're really good at balancing emotions and actions, to the perfect concoction of words that make a character seem so fleshed out that you're the character themselves.
Your writing has such a unique style, that I wish I had. Every time I sit down to read one of your stories, I kind of get halfway excited, and halfway pissed off because you are a million times better at writing than I am.
I can't wait until you get published, you're one of my all time favorite writers. And I know when you do sit down to write your own original story, it'll blow everyone out of the water.
ImOrca chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
You *know how I love surprise!intellectual!Daryl. Tropes!? Tropes!? Effing tropes? I might just have flailed a bit. That's some #smartgirlporn right there... (I'm still hoping for an Antigone reference over in Flutter ;-).)
serpetinefire chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Like the the tone very much, can't wait for the next chapter"