|Reviews for Part of the Pack Redux|
| Haji the Monster chapter 25 . 5/14
just stupid. remove fem-sasuke worst addition ever!
| Nagata Nazaki chapter 21 . 4/3
the test chapter is excellent
| covain chapter 21 . 3/17
Do the kit story would be interesting
| Hito chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
Isn't Shadow Clone Jutsu an A-rank ninjustsu, not an S-rank kenjutsu? Kenjutsu is sword fighting isn't it?
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/7/2015
fuck you the hokage would never allow nartuo to be adopted there by disproving his hole back story
| Bruteforceisthebest chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
Okay good start I'm interested at least.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/29/2015
Wow, way to pull the shitty 'sudden-aging' thing just because your afraid of a bunch of anonymous critics flaming an (up till now) interesting piece of fanFICTION.
| tanzar81 chapter 24 . 8/4/2015
OK to be honest I see alot of stuff you wanted to get through in this chapter. And you did, and for the most part I liked the information and where the story could lead.
BUT I didn't like this chapter. It felt like a crossover between The Twilight Zone and Star Trekk the Adventures of Naruto the Sith Lord. It just gave me a headache. (Yes I understand there were no aspects of those in this fic.)
| tanzar81 chapter 9 . 8/3/2015
Just want to say that I absolutely hate that Naruto now has the Tattoos for a clan he is not a part of. I'm glad he is happy they helped him so much. But I still hate it.
| tanzar81 chapter 4 . 8/3/2015
OK it's your story...
But why hasn't Naruto told the Third about his bonding. I'm sorry but in cannon and almost every fic, he sees the old man as a grandfather. Even if he was shaken from it all happening so fast he still would have thought of his jiji.
And also Tsume knows about the fox. And is a smart woman. She probably knows who his parents are or atleast would have wanted to double check with the Hokage to be sure Naruto didn't have a clan. Atleast before she let him get the clan tattoos.
Unless you changed it for your story the Uzumaki's are/were a clan. Even if Naruto is possible the last one.
I like the story but those point are really bugging me.
| tanzar81 chapter 2 . 8/3/2015
How does the ceremony affect Hanna's chakra control?
| Spidey2 chapter 26 . 6/3/2015
Love it! Keep going!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2015
Please update story soon
| Rman2011 chapter 17 . 5/1/2015
Um just curious but in chapter 16 jiraiya says sarutobi is dead yet in chapter 16 jiraiya is talking to the third hokage whats up with that?
| BartWLewis chapter 26 . 2/27/2015
Love it! The plot is awesome and the harem members aren't half bad. The thing with Sasuke being Sasuki is gold.
Good luck and update soon.