Reviews for Part of the Pack Redux
Monster King chapter 26 . 8/18
Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it because it was getting good.
Animelover1818 chapter 12 . 7/22
I know it doesn't matter now but still gonna say it anko should win and no kakashi bashing others go for it and toads
buji chapter 26 . 2/15
love the story so far keep up the good work and I will keep reading it
Guest chapter 10 . 1/12
To sum up this story, I'll just say that it had potential. Everything is very rushed and many things don't make sense. But oh well.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/12
I read to chap 13 and stopped just toooooo many plot holes naruto losing his temper just cause orichi said he helped with the seal? And the fast romantic progression really kinda feels unnatural and the fast personality change naruto had feels forced so it kills a lot of the story
Stratre chapter 5 . 1/7
very fast for someone in his situation to fall in love
Guest chapter 18 . 11/21/2016
Please update
Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2016
Please tell me this isn't a harem
Haji the Monster chapter 25 . 5/14/2016
just stupid. remove fem-sasuke worst addition ever!
Nagata Nazaki chapter 21 . 4/3/2016
the test chapter is excellent
covain chapter 21 . 3/17/2016
Do the kit story would be interesting
Hito chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
Isn't Shadow Clone Jutsu an A-rank ninjustsu, not an S-rank kenjutsu? Kenjutsu is sword fighting isn't it?
Guest chapter 5 . 11/7/2015
fuck you the hokage would never allow nartuo to be adopted there by disproving his hole back story
Bruteforceisthebest chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
Okay good start I'm interested at least.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/29/2015
Wow, way to pull the shitty 'sudden-aging' thing just because your afraid of a bunch of anonymous critics flaming an (up till now) interesting piece of fanFICTION.
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