Reviews for Broken Promises and New Beginnings
Guest chapter 19 . 5/10
Electric Judgment, also known as Emerald Lightning, was a light side Force technique used to spray electric bolts of variable intensity from the hands and fingers. At one time, it was classified as a forbidden Force power within the Jedi Order; however, some Jedi such as Plo Koon, Luke Skywalker and Jacen Solo practiced it.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/10
Yoda would not allow Obi-Wan and Adi to hook up. He would have nipped it in the bud. I don't think you're a real Star Wars fan. I think you're a moron.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/10
Are you fucking retarded? Obi-Wan/Adi? NO! JUST NO! YUCK! And Jedi are not supposed to have romantic relationships, definitely not with each other. They can have sex, but they can't have romantic feelings for anyone. No boyfriends, no girlfriends, no spouses. Nothing like that. And Adi is too old for Obi-Wan. Siri would've made more sense than Adi.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/10
The Jedi are not supposed to date anyone, let alone each other. So the whole thing with Obi-Wan and Adi is really stupid as shit. So was the conversation between Obi-Wan and Bant about the whole thing, that was stupid as fuck too.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/8
You made a mistake. Qui-Gon was Dooku's Padawan. And Dooku was Yoda's Padawan. Which meant Qui-Gon was Yoda's grandpadawan.
Lilas -Joyoflife chapter 18 . 6/8/2022
It was AMAZING, thank you 3
SherlockEmrysWinchester chapter 19 . 2/2/2021
This fic is beyond amazing! I love how you wrote Qui-Gon bc he screwed up but he was still like able enough that we wanted him to apologize and do the right thing with Obi-Wan
Guest chapter 18 . 11/1/2019
I know you posted this almost 2 decades ago but I was 2 at that time so I couldn’t read it then. Idk if you will ever read this comment but I loved this story. I love how you showed the darkness in Anakin. And I love the way you portrayed the emotion of quigon and obiwan. Thank you so much for creating such an amazing story.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/23/2019
I thought Qui-Gon was Dooku’s Padawan and this Yodas grandpadawan?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/29/2018
You should call this fanfiction “how to find out the f you have a soul”
Honestly I was almost crying when qui and Obi had that big argument

Anyway, this story is written brilliantly and the plot is really good aswell! Keep up the brilliant work
LifeFiction chapter 19 . 1/21/2018
I loved this (even though it made me cry in some parts) and I can’t wait to get to the next part!
jlluh chapter 7 . 12/25/2017
I assume this has been pointed out before, but I'll point it out again.

Canonically, Bant is a Mon Calamari. Like that guy in Return of the Jedi who says "It's a trap!" She looks like a walking squid, and probably thinks Obi-Wan looks equally not attractive. chapter 6 . 9/15/2016
is this gonna be Obidala?
i like Obidala
Le Poussin Fou chapter 1 . 1/13/2016
Qui—Gon is a fucking bastard !
AI chapter 18 . 7/18/2015
Hmm. I read to the end hoping the Quigon and Anakin bashing would go away. Or at least get less obvious, because the hate is very blatant. But it didn't happen. And though Obiwan is my fave character, you're laying the worship on way too thick. So I guess I can commend you on your story attempt but I don't agree with your characterizations at all.
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