|Reviews for Broken Promises and New Beginnings|
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/23
I thought Qui-Gon was Dooku’s Padawan and this Yodas grandpadawan?
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/29/2018
You should call this fanfiction “how to find out the f you have a soul”
Honestly I was almost crying when qui and Obi had that big argument
Anyway, this story is written brilliantly and the plot is really good aswell! Keep up the brilliant work
| LifeFiction chapter 19 . 1/21/2018
I loved this (even though it made me cry in some parts) and I can’t wait to get to the next part!
| jlluh chapter 7 . 12/25/2017
I assume this has been pointed out before, but I'll point it out again.
Canonically, Bant is a Mon Calamari. Like that guy in Return of the Jedi who says "It's a trap!" She looks like a walking squid, and probably thinks Obi-Wan looks equally not attractive.
| The Golden Warrior Princess chapter 6 . 9/15/2016
is this gonna be Obidala?
i like Obidala
| Le Poussin Fou chapter 1 . 1/13/2016
Qui—Gon is a fucking bastard !
| AI chapter 18 . 7/18/2015
Hmm. I read to the end hoping the Quigon and Anakin bashing would go away. Or at least get less obvious, because the hate is very blatant. But it didn't happen. And though Obiwan is my fave character, you're laying the worship on way too thick. So I guess I can commend you on your story attempt but I don't agree with your characterizations at all.
| Wolfgal63 chapter 3 . 4/10/2015
Usually for reviews I wait until I reach the end of the story so that I can go over my favorite parts. However, you did such a wonderful job with this chapter. The emotional tension was gripping, the pacing was perfect and the feels were intense. When Qui Gon said "You'll never know how many times I wish I had" I'll admit there may have been misty eyes on my part. I look forward to reading the rest.
| WinchesterNimrod chapter 8 . 3/14/2015
UGH! You're making me hate Qui-Gon and Anakin so freaking much the feels are tearing me apart! But all the same i cannot stop reading this.
| Book girl fan chapter 18 . 8/19/2013
Things couldn't stay the same. That hard to be one of the hardest moments, in their lives, figuring that out.
| Book girl fan chapter 13 . 8/19/2013
No, that wasn't Jedi, that was human. Normal people act like that, they are resentful towards someone who hurts them, and want to hurt them back in response. Jedi aren't allowed to be like that.
| Book girl fan chapter 12 . 8/19/2013
Now I really want Obi-Wan to meet Anakin. I don't think he hate Anakin. Anakin wasn't the one who decided to leave the Temple, and was simply enthusiastic to become a padawan. Obi-Wan is reasonable enough to notice that.
| Book girl fan chapter 11 . 8/19/2013
I thought that Qui-Gon would be surprised to see Adi with Obi-Wan. It was rather arrogant of him to assume they were apologizing, wasn't it? I think Adi made it a bit extreme. He truly felt he was following the will of the Force. I don't know if that means he was, or he needs to pay more attention to what is his will, and what is the Force's, but you have to give him credit for trying to do what is right.
| Book girl fan chapter 8 . 8/18/2013
Really, in what circumstances would they have not taken him back to the Temple? They need as many Jedi as they can get, and Anakin is too dangerous to be left alone.
After reading this story, and all your enthusiastic recommendations for An Untimely Frost, I might have to read that next!
| Book girl fan chapter 6 . 8/18/2013
Qui-Gon isn't noticing how Anakin is pulling the Dark Side to him?! If that had been Obi-Wan, he would have rebuked him sternly. You explained all so well, though, how Anakin would enjoy the dark, because it covers over his fears and doubts, and tells him that it is alright to be angry.