|Reviews for Broken Promises and New Beginnings|
| BlueElli chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
Awww! That's so sad, sweet! *Sobs and hands a tissue box around*
Wonderful job with the entire fic, and I CAN'T WAIT for the sequel! Yay! Thanks for writing it! It was so great!
| Enchanter chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
Absolutely wonderful! I cannot wait until the sequel! Ooh...Anakin is turning even more evil and annoying than he already is. It was priceless when that stupid boy thought he was the one going to pilote. I loved the Obi/Qui chat. I ponder at what you will have in store for us in the next story...
| SFGrl chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
okay, well, i waited til the end to review, and now i don't know what to say! (and if you knew me, you would be SHOCKED that I am speechless!)
Um, okay, I have only just started reading Star Wars fics, and truth is, I only really read Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan fics, and this one was brilliant! (yeah, hang on, cause I am like, crying over here, thanks for that! lol). I stuck it out til the very end, which is tough for me, but it is a credit to your brilliant writing skills, and your ablility to seamlessly pull Obi-Wan through the five stages of grief. sigh. Great work!
(and you have the honor of getting the longest review I have ever written too, lol)
| Red 921 chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
fabulous.. yeah i know i can't spell. i loved it! this story got me through a long day of school thank you!
| silverfox chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
| AngelBlaze chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
Wow! This story is one of my favorites! Keep up the good work, the resolution scene was nicely written and it was awesome. You could definitely feel the conflicts that Obi(sigh) and Qui had. I can't wait for the sequal!
| trrbd chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
A fitting end. Good job. :)
*begins to wait impatiently for the sequel*
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
*sniff* Hurry up with that sequel :)
| Ewok Kid chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
This chapter totally blew me away!
Best reconciliation scene I've ever read!
Excellent...it really knocked my socks off!
Can't wait for the sequel. This great fic is gonna be hard to top, but I'm sure you'll succeed!
| dark angel chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
awwwwwwwww that's so sweet!i still think Qui was a total jerk but i like the fact that he knows Obi will never be HIS obi wan anymore.I also loved the 'i so want to let u off the hook line', that was really cute and so Obi wanting to forgive him for his faults.I will be waiting impaitently for the squeal so get it out soon!i just wanted to say this is one of the best fics i've ever read and say thanks for ride, it was great!ur really talented so if u write more fics i'll definetely read and the squeal gonna be about the evil little prat known as Anakin?interesting to see wat happens to him.*cough, painful death, painful death*anyway u rock!go u!
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/2/2002
Great story, good resolution between the two. Woohoo! Pleeeease write more about Adi and Obi! Pleasepleaseplease. :) you did damn fine for a first time story.
| jedi7 chapter 17 . 10/1/2002
So now Anakin knows his Master is a liar, and not the all powerful Jinn, now he knows why Obi-wan is the way he is around Qui-gon. I can hardly wait for the next chapter, but I'm dreading it cause it's the final one, will you have a sequel? 7
| JediGal101 chapter 17 . 10/1/2002
So the Dark Times are finally in with write more Obi/Qui angst soon.
| Devlinn Reiko chapter 17 . 10/1/2002
I really enjoyed this chapter! Keep updating
| shanobi chapter 17 . 10/1/2002
Amazing Mel! Really. I am so glad that you decided to do this as well, I think you have many fans that would agree. You have real talent. I love your wording and the way you take your time to set everything up.
The part with Anakin getting angry with Obi in the cockpit when he realized he wouldn't be piloting was ingenious. What a way to show us the little brats true colors! And you did it so well. The part with Qui and Obi in the cockpit was done very well too. Qui, I swear knows how to goad our Obi. Obi wouldn't have gotten so out of control if it werent for Qui's comments. Obi was right of course, but he didn't like how he handled himself.
The last part with Anakin was a shocking and sweet surprise. What dark little thoughts he has running around in that twisted little mind of his. How are you going to end this? I can't wait to find out and I absolutely can't wait for the sequel. Another great post Mel!