Reviews for Night's End
Mrs. 11th chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
I am very intrigued by this, and I can't wait to see where it goes!
OptimisticLady chapter 1 . 7/21/2014

I look forward to reading the rest of it, even though I haven't even read the Percy Jackson books. Shhh. Love me.
Princess Unikitty chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
aah! great chapter. i liked the dialogue.
Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
interesting story so far.
TheOrangeNinjaUnicornSuperhero chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Great job! I love it! Keep going!
WhitePantherLance chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
So, good language. As always, proper spelling and grammar are a must in stories, and as often as I do find so many fanfictions slipping on these things, I'm glad you managed to use them very well, so much so that I did not detect any mistakes. Well done there.
The plot holds an interesting premise so far, but be careful with how you handle the scene with Sam and the blonde girl. That could easily slip into an alternate universe style or something equally weird, which could destroy the unique feel of the story.
Good job on portraying Grovers thoughts, though. They feel genuinely his, down to the bag of tin cans in his bag.
The rest, though, is still too early to tell seeing as this is only chapter 1. However, you have created a decent, if not exactly original hook, and I look forward to reading more. Cheers!