|Reviews for Past Tense|
| in-love-less chapter 1 . 5/15
Sad, but great story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17
like so many I too thought it was bella pov. thinking this all the way through I was rather confused about this fic. I had to re-read to figure out what I missed. I still didn't get it. apparently, somehow I missed the line with "jasper ". I continued in my quest to figure out about your story. I read some reviews and there it was...someone mentioned jasper in his/her review...how silly of me to have completely missed "jasper"in this story...once I found out, I had to re-read again with a new/correct understanding of pov of this amazing story...yes, our society is still so very young...human beings remain immature with little to no knowledge about the "norm" , about tolerance, about loving one another...I'm afraid we have a long way to go. congrats on your win.
| CSG chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
This was... Heartbreaking in the most beautiful way. I usually do not read stories where Edward dies, ever. This kinda snuck up on me, but I really liked it. Thank you for sharing it.
| mtloves chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
Brilliant story, so sad but shows the reality of the world and continued prejudices for sexual preferences. This story is so well written and really love your honesty and your representation of bereavement.
| thunnababy chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
Up until the part where the ignorant classmates were calling him names, I assumed this story was in Bella's Voyce. A very sad, disturbing ending for such a wonderful, gifted young man. You would think in today's enlightened world that whatever your sexual preferences are, it is nobody's business but yours and your partner. I guess there will always be bigots among us and that is very sad.
| sue1zide chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
This is a beautifully, heartbreaking story.
I don't understand people's hatred toward differences. Maybe it's the fear of the unknown.
I was raised to respect until it's not deserved.
| elenalena chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
Oh man...that was a surprising ending! I was completely reading the story thinking it was B...what a plot twist! 3
| cityatnight chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
Ohhhhhhh man! This absolutely DESTROYED me. I didn't read the category it was in, so I was punched in the gut when the POV was revealed as Japer's and not Bella's. It could have worked both ways, and it was interesting trying to reconcile with myself which would be more heartbreaking and why. What a beautiful story! Thank you.
| Abby chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
That was beautiful.
| pigckle8 chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
Wow, I did not expect that at all! The twist of who is actually the narrator. What a great angsty one shot!
| IceChocolateTammy chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
I must admit I went in reading this thinking that it was a BPOV, and I'm sure many people did as well. So when the twist came about, you really drove home the point about society's expectations and stereotyping of relationships, because aren't we not automatically "trained" to think of "normal" relationships as boy-girl relationships? To reveal that this is actually Jasper's story made this little fic all the more heart wrenching and beautiful, especially when this Edward is a victim of cyber bullying and a victim of his chosen sexual orientation, and we all only know how many others are victims of the same issue till today. I admire your brilliance and your sensitivity and flair to your craft. Kudos to a story well written.
| Mumofpicklegirls chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
You really are talented aren't you - so well written and very very clever
Thank you for sharing
| meelee72 chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
Well that was a twist, the surprise got me.
- It makes me so sad that things like this really happen.
U wrote it beautifully, tho so tragic.
U portayed the real & raw emotions just right.- broke my heart.
| Britmom chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
This was beautiful, thank you!
| Leila chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
Made me cry. Great but very sad fic.