Reviews for Past Tense
Sophiepicklegirl chapter 1 . 1/24
You really are talented aren't you - so well written and very very clever
Thank you for sharing
xxx
meelee729697 chapter 1 . 1/22
Well that was a twist, the surprise got me.
- It makes me so sad that things like this really happen.
U wrote it beautifully, tho so tragic.
U portayed the real & raw emotions just right.- broke my heart.
Britmom chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
This was beautiful, thank you!
Leila chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
Made me cry. Great but very sad fic.
JaN319 chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Can you explain this?

So Jasper and Edward were in a relationship?

Edward had sex with Bella? I'm so confused.
In A Mood chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
That was brutal. Lots of tears. Great writing though.
Sparkly1 chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Ok, you said it right up front. Angst/Tragedy. And in the acknowledgment "sorry for the tears"... but I was not prepared. My Kleenex box was not prepared. I will never be prepared for stories like this. Heart wrenching sadness warring bone shaking anger. I think what makes this story great is that you don't find out it's Jasper until the end. And what burns me inside is that there ARE cowardly cyber bullies out there and this HAS truly happened. Your story is fiction, but based on fact and that is what leaves me feeling so angry. Live and let live, people. ::sigh::

Now I gotta go shopping for more Kleenex. :)

S.
Lynnerva chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
OMG I didn't realize it was Jasper until Esme called him that in the story *facepalm*. His point of view is quite...feminine. Even after realizing Jasper was the one narrating, I kept on thinking of him as Bella.
helenemc chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
Beautifully written, but I did not pick up on the clues.
Amy chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
OH MY GOD WHY DID YOU DO THIS. WHY.
NO
NO
NO
DA FEELS MAAAN.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
that was so sad
Mayuri love cullens chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
I'm crying my hearts out :'( its such a great story but a very sad one :'( at 1st i thought its bella bt then i got to knw tht its jasper.. Such a sad beautiful story :)
twi nana chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
amazing, and so so sad...so sad
DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I remember this...nice
Pyejammies chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
What a tear jerker. It say s it all. Why do some enjoy making the lives of others hell? This happens way too often. Thanks for writing.
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