Reviews for Mentally Unstable
blacktarget chapter 2 . 2/17/2014
duuuude this looked great
Alphillious chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
pls, pls do continue this, i want to know what happens was a flashback and i would love to know the rest, this chapter sounds like it culd lead into an awesome full on story
Catt chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Great foundation and good plot so far, good grammar which is awesome, i cant wait to read more :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I'll log in later to review, promise-
This is a cute story, it has a good plot line and it could go in a couple directions. I would love to see more :) keep up the good work!
AdikoKoizumi19 chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Please update!
lack-4-a-better-name chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
OOOOOOOH i really like this so far. i love Dark!Bart it always makes things more angsty and intense
Please keep up the marvelous work :)
ana.manzana2 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I like where this is going. Looking forward to the next update :D
princessgothicfull chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I like it. Your writing style is quite enjoyable, and as fas as I can see, you have got good grammar, that is good. I will patiently wait to see how you develop this, good work so far.