Reviews for Trouble
loving-reader-and-writer chapter 1 . 1/31
Lovely story, exactly how I would imagine it going.
glidingshades chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Great story! I love the interactions between the characters and Alanna's comments and reactions seem very believable as both a mother and a female knight.
DominaNocte chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Ya' know I'd love to read about the first day Alan spent at the Royal Palace to start his training, or you know, to visit with his parents. :D
1sunfun chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Nice
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
That was nicely done. Very nicely done especially with a rather difficult topic.
-Dyslexic Nerd
1Kiko chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
I can so see Alanna reacting this way! Man, one of her kids needs to be able to see that she isn't such a stick in the mud. I laughed so hard, for so long. Thank you so much.

:] Kiko
lfrendr2 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
This is wonderful!
GreenQueen615 chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Mmmmmm...I like it. Very cute, very funny, very in character. Was the shrinking-prank inspired by The Twits (by Roald Dahl)?
Enigmaticrose4 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
A very good little story. Also, love the prank!