|Reviews for Branching Out|
| LadyBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
I really like this although I would have liked Alanna to make a comment about being a twin, being a twin herself. Especially as someone who lost her twin and would never get him back. I feel like Aly and Alan, even more than the rest of their family would understand the horror/pain/trauma of losing your other half like that. And Alanna would probably know more on what is normal with twins, what they need, words of wisdom, etc.
| Revolution Remix IX chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
I love this! There's one mispelled word (took) in the bit when Aly and Alan are fighting, but otherwise, this seems perfectly canon to me!
| 1Kiko chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Man, that would be hard. I remember my siblings going through a similar phase (they're twins). Though I'm not sure it ever escalated to that point. Thank God.
I wonder how Alanna felt in that moment when Alan said he hates being a twin. I imagine it would hurt for an instant.
| laughsquietly chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Is there going to be more of this? Cause I like it.
Please update soon!