Reviews for Branching Out
LadyBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
I really like this although I would have liked Alanna to make a comment about being a twin, being a twin herself. Especially as someone who lost her twin and would never get him back. I feel like Aly and Alan, even more than the rest of their family would understand the horror/pain/trauma of losing your other half like that. And Alanna would probably know more on what is normal with twins, what they need, words of wisdom, etc.
Revolution Remix IX chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
I love this! There's one mispelled word (took) in the bit when Aly and Alan are fighting, but otherwise, this seems perfectly canon to me!
1Kiko chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Man, that would be hard. I remember my siblings going through a similar phase (they're twins). Though I'm not sure it ever escalated to that point. Thank God.

I wonder how Alanna felt in that moment when Alan said he hates being a twin. I imagine it would hurt for an instant.

:] Kiko
laughsquietly chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Is there going to be more of this? Cause I like it.
Please update soon!