Reviews for Sunshine
Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2017
HotXbun chapter 33 . 6/10/2015
(Clapping)Bravo!Bravo!I'm gonna start reading Moon Beam tomorrow!
Guest chapter 15 . 5/13/2015
Hey, I noticed that you keep writing angle instead of angel. I just wanted to point that out to prevent confusion for other readers. I really like this story!
Guest chapter 36 . 4/20/2015
Guest chapter 30 . 4/20/2015
Slapped thing. Austin adopted the kid.
Guest chapter 24 . 4/20/2015
More to the slapped thing they made the girl that saved the kid family.
Guest chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
This story is just like "SLAPPED". There is a little kid that got kidnapped by there parent's. A girl that knew the parents saved the little girl. Austin got shot in his shoulder. Ally's in the hospital. The kid got hurt by there parents. Ally has to pretend to be Austins girlfriend. Austin asked ally to marry her and so many more.
vmt1998 chapter 36 . 2/2/2015
Hi I really enjoyed reading your story I was wondering if you could read my story Last chance when you have time if you could I would appreciate it very much thank you
Guest chapter 33 . 1/12/2015
this was a great story
Guest chapter 16 . 1/10/2015
that was a great them kissing
Ausllymoon chapter 33 . 12/17/2014
Awh this story was perfect! I loved it all so much 33 time to go see if you have any other ones!
Ausllymoon chapter 31 . 12/17/2014
lol change the texting, I hate that it's in texting form like that lol no one texts Like that anymore and if they really loved eachother (which they do) they'd spell it out. love the story :)
Guest chapter 28 . 12/13/2014
HOW THE HECK DID THEIR SENTENCE GET REDUCED!? I forgot to ask before but is Austin the blonde kid that Ally had a crush on?
Guest chapter 22 . 12/12/2014
Elliot is an idiot. He already knew most of that stuff! But it seems like he is regretting it,so he's still definetly not a good guy but he might not be a bad guy either
Guest chapter 20 . 12/12/2014
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I AM SO SA! How could you do this to them!? By the way 'behavioral spanks' with a spiked belt would in NO way hold up in court and I am pretty sure that even if you are just doing 'chores' it can still be classified as child labor.
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